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12/12/2012 c1 10DarkestChasm
This is WAY to short...why so short?
3/12/2011 c1 pageleaf
Wow. This is quite brilliant. It captures specific characters and emotions in such a short amount of words. I actually wouldn't mind reading this filled out into a longer story, but this is just amazing as it is.
4/12/2009 c1 128vitriolicvermilion
Rarely does a story make me feel all fuzzy inside.

This one did.
6/15/2008 c1 30cormorant
This was my face after reading this: ^.^
5/3/2008 c1 71Subbie
:) it made me smile. Keep going!
6/30/2007 c1 3i kiss to tell
so sweet! i loved it! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)
6/17/2007 c1 10channel-violet
If you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.

Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.

Keep on writing.

6/13/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
cute and sweet. I like it.
6/11/2007 c1 63lackluster
the beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.
5/27/2007 c1 99night62611
aw very sweet, enjoyed it
5/14/2007 c1 94smile persephone
Simple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.
5/14/2007 c1 2hazy scribbles
wonderful, as is all your work.

concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).

never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.
5/13/2007 c1 Mona Lisa Smiles
This sucks.
5/13/2007 c1 hey maria
I always cheat on oneword, I take longer than a minute.

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