for Blind3/12/2011 c1 pageleaf
Wow. This is quite brilliant. It captures specific characters and emotions in such a short amount of words. I actually wouldn't mind reading this filled out into a longer story, but this is just amazing as it is.
Wow. This is quite brilliant. It captures specific characters and emotions in such a short amount of words. I actually wouldn't mind reading this filled out into a longer story, but this is just amazing as it is.
6/30/2007 c1 
3i kiss to tell
so sweet! i loved it! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)
3i kiss to tellso sweet! i loved it! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)
6/17/2007 c1 10channel-violet
If you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.
Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.
Keep on writing.
-Mika
10channel-violetIf you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.
Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.
Keep on writing.
-Mika
6/11/2007 c1 63lackluster
the beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.
63lacklusterthe beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.
5/14/2007 c1 94smile persephone
Simple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.
94smile persephoneSimple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.
5/14/2007 c1 2hazy scribbles
wonderful, as is all your work.
concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).
never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.
2hazy scribbleswonderful, as is all your work.
concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).
never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.
5/13/2007 c1 Mona Lisa Smiles
This sucks.
This sucks.