for Fledgling7/2/2007 c13 
6Carmel March
Hey, that wasn't a crappy fighting scene! I liked it. Short, but you packed a punch even with those few paragraphs. Great job :) I'm looking forward to more of this!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchHey, that wasn't a crappy fighting scene! I liked it. Short, but you packed a punch even with those few paragraphs. Great job :) I'm looking forward to more of this!
~carm~
6/20/2007 c4 1LunaWolfheart
aww that was cute at the beginning! shopping! oh so much fun! but kinda sad at the end! poor thing!
~Luna
1LunaWolfheartaww that was cute at the beginning! shopping! oh so much fun! but kinda sad at the end! poor thing!
~Luna
6/20/2007 c11 luv me like no other
Is this mysterious new man the fourth race? Or is Audrey's baby the fourth race? Or is Meghan the fourth race? eep!
Is this mysterious new man the fourth race? Or is Audrey's baby the fourth race? Or is Meghan the fourth race? eep!
6/20/2007 c10 luv me like no other
Whoa, I'd love to be ur beta! Um also, i want to have your babies too, because you're such an awesome writer! lol.
Whoa, I'd love to be ur beta! Um also, i want to have your babies too, because you're such an awesome writer! lol.
6/19/2007 c10 Carmel March
This proved to be an excellent finals-distracting chapter. I was about to turn off my computer to sit down and study for my Economics exam when I decided to check my email. And when I saw that you had updated, I couldn't resist :) Great chapter! Very intriguing :D Update as soon as you can!
~carm~
This proved to be an excellent finals-distracting chapter. I was about to turn off my computer to sit down and study for my Economics exam when I decided to check my email. And when I saw that you had updated, I couldn't resist :) Great chapter! Very intriguing :D Update as soon as you can!
~carm~
6/19/2007 c3 1LunaWolfheart
o i liked that! very nice! was really good..you still have a few spelling misatkes..but thats ok nobody is perfect ne?
~Luna
1LunaWolfhearto i liked that! very nice! was really good..you still have a few spelling misatkes..but thats ok nobody is perfect ne?
~Luna
6/19/2007 c2 LunaWolfheart
that was really good i enjoyed reading that! it is completly different from what ive read before! i like it!
~Luna
that was really good i enjoyed reading that! it is completly different from what ive read before! i like it!
~Luna
6/18/2007 c1 LunaWolfheart
that was lame in the least bit! thought it was pretty kool! kinda reminds me of an anime show i watched called fullmoon. really cute. ^-^ i like your story! its really good so far
~ Luna
P.s. just posted my frist story2 chaptes now! please read and review
that was lame in the least bit! thought it was pretty kool! kinda reminds me of an anime show i watched called fullmoon. really cute. ^-^ i like your story! its really good so far
~ Luna
P.s. just posted my frist story2 chaptes now! please read and review
6/16/2007 c9 6Carmel March
Well, I liked this chapter. It wasn't boring! Just informative.
Hmm, next chapter should probably be in Jonathan's point of view. I think that would work the best.
Update as soon as possible!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchWell, I liked this chapter. It wasn't boring! Just informative.
Hmm, next chapter should probably be in Jonathan's point of view. I think that would work the best.
Update as soon as possible!
~carm~
6/14/2007 c9 luv me like no other
eep! I noticed a few typos in this chapter. However, it was very interesting. The angels seem more cold and cruel than the demons, who at least rescue their kind from captivity...
eep! I noticed a few typos in this chapter. However, it was very interesting. The angels seem more cold and cruel than the demons, who at least rescue their kind from captivity...