for Grievance1/6/2011 c1 
14Ulquiorra9000
I like how self-acknowledging this poem is, and the curious balance between bravely admitting a fault and being bitter about it too. nice!
14Ulquiorra9000I like how self-acknowledging this poem is, and the curious balance between bravely admitting a fault and being bitter about it too. nice!
3/26/2008 c1 SMTS
This was a rather intriguing piece. It seemed to be written in the point of view of someone that had been emotionally hurt by someone he or she trusted. The repetition of what "You" said was a lovely literary device.
Keep up the good work!
~K3k
This was a rather intriguing piece. It seemed to be written in the point of view of someone that had been emotionally hurt by someone he or she trusted. The repetition of what "You" said was a lovely literary device.
Keep up the good work!
~K3k
5/28/2007 c1 10DarkBlysse
I liked the repitition in this, and the ending was really nifty with the 'A day and day/A month and...' part.
Good work!
10DarkBlysseI liked the repitition in this, and the ending was really nifty with the 'A day and day/A month and...' part.
Good work!