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7/12/2007 c1 68this is britt
i didn't expect something so powerful. i feel like i'm walking out with a black eye. you are constantly amazing me; that is a fact.
6/17/2007 c1 recycle rhymes
it has a good flow and diction. the words are weaved very nicely. keep on going.
5/17/2007 c1 hey maria
Short poetry is my favorite, especially when it's as concise and powerful as this.
5/17/2007 c1 22Alice Faraday
That was interesting. It reminds me a lot of this certain style...oh, what's it called...imagism?...symbolism?...derived from the haiku... not quite sure, but it's cool.

~Aiden~
5/17/2007 c1 306Ashelin
Thas was a really nasty image, but it definately put out a statement. The last line especially. Great job.

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