for I'd Rather Die5/31/2012 c3 
27absentmindedprofessor
This is a really interesting idea. I was a little sceptical when I read that it was about Satan falling in love with a sixteen-year-old girl, but I think you've managed it well. It certainly seems intriguing, anyway. Can't wait for the next update!
27absentmindedprofessorThis is a really interesting idea. I was a little sceptical when I read that it was about Satan falling in love with a sixteen-year-old girl, but I think you've managed it well. It certainly seems intriguing, anyway. Can't wait for the next update!
3/3/2012 c2 7N-butterfly
This is super intriguing. I wonder how you even came up with this idea... However, I would think that the devil falling in love would be more of a failure for him than a triumph since he, you know, is all about hatred and all that. This chase is interesting.
7N-butterflyThis is super intriguing. I wonder how you even came up with this idea... However, I would think that the devil falling in love would be more of a failure for him than a triumph since he, you know, is all about hatred and all that. This chase is interesting.
3/3/2012 c1 N-butterfly
Whoa, this is definitely nothing like what I've read before! I like how you started the chap with suspense like that, but was shocked around the end. Pretty good chapter :)
Whoa, this is definitely nothing like what I've read before! I like how you started the chap with suspense like that, but was shocked around the end. Pretty good chapter :)
12/14/2011 c3 5Mikazukiful
OH come on you silly billy. You need to update! o lets put it this way, update or i start beheading teddy bears and this one looks really really sad right now. so dont push it! XP
I love it, but UPDATE.
Mucho Grasias
5MikazukifulOH come on you silly billy. You need to update! o lets put it this way, update or i start beheading teddy bears and this one looks really really sad right now. so dont push it! XP
I love it, but UPDATE.
Mucho Grasias
12/2/2009 c3 3KattyJay
A little abrupt, it seems like a short story because everything is happening so fast. Lucifer already caught her and she submitted. Sounds to me like the climax of the tale. I will want to see how this turns out.
Smile Always, Katty Jay
3KattyJayA little abrupt, it seems like a short story because everything is happening so fast. Lucifer already caught her and she submitted. Sounds to me like the climax of the tale. I will want to see how this turns out.
Smile Always, Katty Jay
7/10/2009 c3 1SmearedRedTearDrops
0.o I love your story! You haven't updated in 2 years ... so does that mean you've left this story? Don't give up ! This is really good! xx
1SmearedRedTearDrops0.o I love your story! You haven't updated in 2 years ... so does that mean you've left this story? Don't give up ! This is really good! xx
5/1/2009 c3 11KT-ImmortalIncarnate
Update please? I like this story, and it seems quite interesting, and it seems you haven't updated since 2 years ago! rawr, but I really do like your story.
ImmortalIncarnate
11KT-ImmortalIncarnateUpdate please? I like this story, and it seems quite interesting, and it seems you haven't updated since 2 years ago! rawr, but I really do like your story.
ImmortalIncarnate
2/20/2009 c3 6L'Archange
Okay...so I thought I should check out what you have...and...lo and behold - an interesting plot line. But what is it about Rose that attracted him to her? Anyway, I'm interested to know more about your characters and to read more interaction... I would also love to see more history between them (the four months or so of cat and mouse interaction that is)
Oh, and thank for your review (because of it, I've found a story I like)...
I notice you haven't updated in a while...is this story on hiatus?
L'Archange
6L'ArchangeOkay...so I thought I should check out what you have...and...lo and behold - an interesting plot line. But what is it about Rose that attracted him to her? Anyway, I'm interested to know more about your characters and to read more interaction... I would also love to see more history between them (the four months or so of cat and mouse interaction that is)
Oh, and thank for your review (because of it, I've found a story I like)...
I notice you haven't updated in a while...is this story on hiatus?
L'Archange
11/26/2007 c3 4039301
I really love your story and I hope that you update soon. I think you might enjoy the book A Long And Fatal Love Chase by Louisa May Alcott. It has a corney tittle but it really reminds me of your story. Please update soon
4039301I really love your story and I hope that you update soon. I think you might enjoy the book A Long And Fatal Love Chase by Louisa May Alcott. It has a corney tittle but it really reminds me of your story. Please update soon
11/9/2007 c3 Winged Eyeliner Maiven
I figured that I would return the favor of reviewing your story, as you did mine. :)
When I read up what your topic was, I can honestly say I was kinda giddy with anticipation, mainly because people try not to touch your subject matter too much. Some, like one of your reviewers, find it a bit taboo to even mention them, so it's good to see that you're going out there to talk about Lucifer. He is quite an interesting topic.
With that said, I do have some qualms with how Lucifer and Rose relate to one another. Because Lucifer was never human, he really doesn't relate to love the way we do. Angels, I think, were never really given emotions like us. They feel no pain and such, so it makes it difficult for them to share emotions with humans.
I think, Lucifer's definition of affection or love, would be vastly different from Roses'. I guess, in essence, you kinda have give us background on how the Lucifer in your story varies from the one we've all read about. Lucifer is said to have fallen because of Pride and Envy. So, he wouldn't love a human for any means, because he thought God loved us far more than they (Angels).
If you'd like to talk about this further, please PM me, or send me an e-mail. I'd be more than happy to speak to you about it. I write stories of a similar nature, so I've looked up some of this information. :)
I hope this review proves useful. :) Thank you for your kind review as well.
Adara
I figured that I would return the favor of reviewing your story, as you did mine. :)
When I read up what your topic was, I can honestly say I was kinda giddy with anticipation, mainly because people try not to touch your subject matter too much. Some, like one of your reviewers, find it a bit taboo to even mention them, so it's good to see that you're going out there to talk about Lucifer. He is quite an interesting topic.
With that said, I do have some qualms with how Lucifer and Rose relate to one another. Because Lucifer was never human, he really doesn't relate to love the way we do. Angels, I think, were never really given emotions like us. They feel no pain and such, so it makes it difficult for them to share emotions with humans.
I think, Lucifer's definition of affection or love, would be vastly different from Roses'. I guess, in essence, you kinda have give us background on how the Lucifer in your story varies from the one we've all read about. Lucifer is said to have fallen because of Pride and Envy. So, he wouldn't love a human for any means, because he thought God loved us far more than they (Angels).
If you'd like to talk about this further, please PM me, or send me an e-mail. I'd be more than happy to speak to you about it. I write stories of a similar nature, so I've looked up some of this information. :)
I hope this review proves useful. :) Thank you for your kind review as well.
Adara
5/29/2007 c3 6Drake Van
hey hey! great chapter! i really liked the bit about the nursery rhyme, very nice touch :) you got your tenses mixed here and there; where i think you wanted 'readying' you had 'reading' which confused me a bit until i figured out what you ment (and if the reader has to stop to figure out what word you mean, to me, it detracts from the flow of the story :) just letting you know) and you still need to work on your grammar and punctuation :) other than that it was nicely written and i hope you update soon!
Drake Van
6Drake Vanhey hey! great chapter! i really liked the bit about the nursery rhyme, very nice touch :) you got your tenses mixed here and there; where i think you wanted 'readying' you had 'reading' which confused me a bit until i figured out what you ment (and if the reader has to stop to figure out what word you mean, to me, it detracts from the flow of the story :) just letting you know) and you still need to work on your grammar and punctuation :) other than that it was nicely written and i hope you update soon!
Drake Van
5/28/2007 c3 Blueberry Sparkle
This was a tad. . . disturbing, is the only word I can find. Poor Rose. Her whole life's been ripped away from her.
This was a tad. . . disturbing, is the only word I can find. Poor Rose. Her whole life's been ripped away from her.
5/28/2007 c3 Sekhra
Hm... interesting. I'm not quite sure what kind of reactions your piece provokes. I'm definitely drawn to it, but I can't say anything conclusive until I read more, I guess.
On that note, please continue!
Hm... interesting. I'm not quite sure what kind of reactions your piece provokes. I'm definitely drawn to it, but I can't say anything conclusive until I read more, I guess.
On that note, please continue!