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306Ashelin
Very sweet with a somewhat sad tone to it. I liked it a lot though. I adored the first stanza. Great job.
306AshelinVery sweet with a somewhat sad tone to it. I liked it a lot though. I adored the first stanza. Great job.
5/18/2007 c1 99castelgard
great shakespearean sonnet.. i love the hope conveyed through the second stanza.. its kind of a desperate grip, almost unbearable to let go..
99castelgardgreat shakespearean sonnet.. i love the hope conveyed through the second stanza.. its kind of a desperate grip, almost unbearable to let go..
5/18/2007 c1 57Tutube
Ah, what a beautiful poem! Wonderful form, rhyme, rhythm. . . .Very nice flow. Most of all, I love the idea, the surrender, and the prayer like feel. How your care for not just her emotional and physical well being, but the well being of her very soul comes through very clearly. Keep it up =)
57TutubeAh, what a beautiful poem! Wonderful form, rhyme, rhythm. . . .Very nice flow. Most of all, I love the idea, the surrender, and the prayer like feel. How your care for not just her emotional and physical well being, but the well being of her very soul comes through very clearly. Keep it up =)