for Loving Evil6/3/2007 c5 
12it's only castles burning
basically you're one of the best writers on this site. basically.
i mean, i don't usually like supernatural freaky vampire-type stories.
but this is so much more than that. i completely love it. i'm obsessed.
12it's only castles burningbasically you're one of the best writers on this site. basically.
i mean, i don't usually like supernatural freaky vampire-type stories.
but this is so much more than that. i completely love it. i'm obsessed.
6/2/2007 c5 6Gakuhaitsu
Ok. OK. I'm giving you a review, or whatever you want for that matter. Anything. Just don't stop writing no matter what happens. I'm so in luv with the story. MORE! I need it. Damien... I think I'm slowly falling in love with him. Actually, it's more like I fell in love with him almost immediately after he made his first appearance.
As for Dominic etc... don't mean to offent you or anything, but I loath him currently.
Seriously wouldn't mind a 20 page chapter tmr. LOL. I won't rush you, just keep it at your own pace and keep writing in you fantastical way of yours.
6GakuhaitsuOk. OK. I'm giving you a review, or whatever you want for that matter. Anything. Just don't stop writing no matter what happens. I'm so in luv with the story. MORE! I need it. Damien... I think I'm slowly falling in love with him. Actually, it's more like I fell in love with him almost immediately after he made his first appearance.
As for Dominic etc... don't mean to offent you or anything, but I loath him currently.
Seriously wouldn't mind a 20 page chapter tmr. LOL. I won't rush you, just keep it at your own pace and keep writing in you fantastical way of yours.
5/30/2007 c1 kstar129
I'm going on a whim here,but I'm gonna guess this:
Blake is evil,Dominic is good,and Cyrus is neutral.
Anyway this is really good!
I'm going on a whim here,but I'm gonna guess this:
Blake is evil,Dominic is good,and Cyrus is neutral.
Anyway this is really good!
5/29/2007 c5 ryror0x
pleze keep goin! i rlly like this story! hm. son of the devil. interesting. me likes! u gotta keep going. i reviewed!
pleze keep goin! i rlly like this story! hm. son of the devil. interesting. me likes! u gotta keep going. i reviewed!
5/29/2007 c5 ham3
(gasp) There’s something really bad about Dominic, isn’t there? I wonder how and why Dominic killed Lux. And in chapter 2, Lux hightailed out of Dominic’s house because she saw a “something in his eyes [that] wasn’t a good something.”
Please keep writing; this story is really cool and I’d be sad if you stopped it.
(gasp) There’s something really bad about Dominic, isn’t there? I wonder how and why Dominic killed Lux. And in chapter 2, Lux hightailed out of Dominic’s house because she saw a “something in his eyes [that] wasn’t a good something.”
Please keep writing; this story is really cool and I’d be sad if you stopped it.
5/29/2007 c5 Stoker
Ah, don't quit writing. I am very intrigued by this story. I like Blake a lot. Darkness is usually more fun, anyway. lol. I've been completely lazy today, and I am getting ready to reply to your email. Cheers for new internet friends!
Ah, don't quit writing. I am very intrigued by this story. I like Blake a lot. Darkness is usually more fun, anyway. lol. I've been completely lazy today, and I am getting ready to reply to your email. Cheers for new internet friends!
5/29/2007 c5 3I Quoth Nevermore
Great update!
I just wanna say that I think that Oriel was suppose to call him Damien in the flashback thing, not Blake. Because in the present he's known as Blake, right?
Anyways. Blake is SO cute. I know he's on the dark side and all but he loves her SO much! It's adorable.
AND DOMINIC KILLED HER! WHAT! That's crazy...insane...absolutely brilliant writing. I love the whole "just because I have the evil title doesn't mean I'm the evil one" Amazing.
Please udpate soon! That was a teasing ending. How will Lux react? And I love the Bible tie in. Please update...NOW!
3I Quoth NevermoreGreat update!
I just wanna say that I think that Oriel was suppose to call him Damien in the flashback thing, not Blake. Because in the present he's known as Blake, right?
Anyways. Blake is SO cute. I know he's on the dark side and all but he loves her SO much! It's adorable.
AND DOMINIC KILLED HER! WHAT! That's crazy...insane...absolutely brilliant writing. I love the whole "just because I have the evil title doesn't mean I'm the evil one" Amazing.
Please udpate soon! That was a teasing ending. How will Lux react? And I love the Bible tie in. Please update...NOW!
5/27/2007 c4 ElusiveReader
Quite interesting story and I like the way you leave various hints for the main plot without being too clear - e.g. the dreams and the necklace or even the characters' names. I am not even sure whether the story's title is in purpose misleading. I am certainly intrigued and even though I do have some theories I will just have to wait :) A point which confused me was at Chapter 3, were Blake and Oriel talk with a man with red eyes, the way you are describing it, it is not clear whether his name is Damien or that is Blake's other name. Anyway, I am looking forward to reading more!
Quite interesting story and I like the way you leave various hints for the main plot without being too clear - e.g. the dreams and the necklace or even the characters' names. I am not even sure whether the story's title is in purpose misleading. I am certainly intrigued and even though I do have some theories I will just have to wait :) A point which confused me was at Chapter 3, were Blake and Oriel talk with a man with red eyes, the way you are describing it, it is not clear whether his name is Damien or that is Blake's other name. Anyway, I am looking forward to reading more!
5/23/2007 c4 ryror0x
OH! yayayayayay! well, if hes not a vampire, what is he? hm. must read on. keep riting! plzz? 4 me? and all ur other lovly reviewers? plz! oh, y am i begging? i know ur gona keep goin. cuz ur such a nice riter :) yay! im rly rly hyper. HEHE!
OH! yayayayayay! well, if hes not a vampire, what is he? hm. must read on. keep riting! plzz? 4 me? and all ur other lovly reviewers? plz! oh, y am i begging? i know ur gona keep goin. cuz ur such a nice riter :) yay! im rly rly hyper. HEHE!
5/23/2007 c4 ham3
Hiya! Thanks for updating! Chapter 4 was good. One question: Why did Blake drive Lux around aimlessly and then stop at a movie store? Is that scene important to the main mystery of the story or not?
Hiya! Thanks for updating! Chapter 4 was good. One question: Why did Blake drive Lux around aimlessly and then stop at a movie store? Is that scene important to the main mystery of the story or not?
5/23/2007 c4 I Quoth Nevermore
Great update. Very interesting. So, supposedly Oriel didn't love Blake in the first place ("and you can’t stand me again.") That's something to think about...
And it SO cute when Blake says Lux is the only piece of heaven he can have. That was an "AWW!" moment.
And you left it off on a cliffy! ::mumbles:: So cruel...Please update soon!
Oh and the only mistake I found was: I couldn’t here his answer. It should be "hear" and not "here."
PLEASE UPDATE!
Great update. Very interesting. So, supposedly Oriel didn't love Blake in the first place ("and you can’t stand me again.") That's something to think about...
And it SO cute when Blake says Lux is the only piece of heaven he can have. That was an "AWW!" moment.
And you left it off on a cliffy! ::mumbles:: So cruel...Please update soon!
Oh and the only mistake I found was: I couldn’t here his answer. It should be "hear" and not "here."
PLEASE UPDATE!
5/23/2007 c4 5dreamweaver138
ok, so the review for chap 3 wasn't entirely necessary, but oh well. anyway, love the update and hope you update soon!
dreamweaver138
5dreamweaver138ok, so the review for chap 3 wasn't entirely necessary, but oh well. anyway, love the update and hope you update soon!
dreamweaver138
5/22/2007 c3 dreamweaver138
awesome, love the story so far. hope you update this soon!
dreamweaver138
awesome, love the story so far. hope you update this soon!
dreamweaver138