for Battered5/20/2007 c1 
33Striped Candycane
Nice...I liked the image of a "battered blue sky", of something beautiful but torn. The repetitions worked well, especially the "what needs...". This poem is very true and very pure. Thumbs up!
33Striped CandycaneNice...I liked the image of a "battered blue sky", of something beautiful but torn. The repetitions worked well, especially the "what needs...". This poem is very true and very pure. Thumbs up!