for Everything is Three7/13/2007 c1 CandleQueen
I think this one is my favorite so far. *sigh*...another one for my favorites...(I think it's getting kinda full)
-Ramen
I think this one is my favorite so far. *sigh*...another one for my favorites...(I think it's getting kinda full)
-Ramen
5/27/2007 c1 
49ignominy
I read this three times over and each time i did it was as if i was reading a different poem. everything ws new and alien and completly deja vu and i just couldnt get enough of it. each line was like an oxymoron. wonderfully complicated. i wish i could put it on my favorites list twice.
49ignominyI read this three times over and each time i did it was as if i was reading a different poem. everything ws new and alien and completly deja vu and i just couldnt get enough of it. each line was like an oxymoron. wonderfully complicated. i wish i could put it on my favorites list twice.
5/22/2007 c1 34Lilac Ebony
Very nice poem, the wording creates wonderful imagery but the breaking of stanzas and punctuation could be better to make the poem more dramatic and to slow it some for thought, but still a wonder poem beautifully written
34Lilac EbonyVery nice poem, the wording creates wonderful imagery but the breaking of stanzas and punctuation could be better to make the poem more dramatic and to slow it some for thought, but still a wonder poem beautifully written
5/22/2007 c1 16Cheeseraptor5
Exellent; everything is just woven together so seamlessly and with a very distinct and pleasing sense of elegance... it's a smooth, meandering and lovingly hectic blend of feelings and thought-provoking imagery that struck me as a particularly eye-catching poem. I truly enjoyed it.
16Cheeseraptor5Exellent; everything is just woven together so seamlessly and with a very distinct and pleasing sense of elegance... it's a smooth, meandering and lovingly hectic blend of feelings and thought-provoking imagery that struck me as a particularly eye-catching poem. I truly enjoyed it.
5/22/2007 c1 she smolders
I've never read such a tragically beautiful and sad description of a love triangle before. You've left me speechless. Take care.
I've never read such a tragically beautiful and sad description of a love triangle before. You've left me speechless. Take care.
5/21/2007 c1 91MyInspiration
I loved reading this. I loved the way you did every last line "S/he is Death/Love/Life" You portrayed the three beautifully.
91MyInspirationI loved reading this. I loved the way you did every last line "S/he is Death/Love/Life" You portrayed the three beautifully.
5/21/2007 c1 45drafts of ka
It just... works. I thank you for that. And I like the lack of punctuation ;-)
45drafts of kaIt just... works. I thank you for that. And I like the lack of punctuation ;-)
5/21/2007 c1 19VIOLENTLYmistaken
I don't even know where to start, this was absolutely wonderful, the imagery and the way you envisioned Death, Love, and Life is so fresh but so true.
But the last stanza is my favourite.
And honestly I can sing your praises forever.
By the way, thank you for the review, I'm ridiculously flattered.
19VIOLENTLYmistakenI don't even know where to start, this was absolutely wonderful, the imagery and the way you envisioned Death, Love, and Life is so fresh but so true.
But the last stanza is my favourite.
And honestly I can sing your praises forever.
By the way, thank you for the review, I'm ridiculously flattered.
5/20/2007 c1 78a beautiful somewhere
Where to start?
I really really love this.
I seriously think this is my absolute favorite of all your poems that I've read.
I don't even know how to explain it...
The way you describe Death and Love and Life. It all just echoes in my mind. I've said before that your words paint pictures in my head, and never has it been more true than in reading this.
78a beautiful somewhereWhere to start?
I really really love this.
I seriously think this is my absolute favorite of all your poems that I've read.
I don't even know how to explain it...
The way you describe Death and Love and Life. It all just echoes in my mind. I've said before that your words paint pictures in my head, and never has it been more true than in reading this.