for The Undead Givers6/10/2011 c33 Demon-666-Child
Really good story.
Some of these things weren't very realistic, like the way you depicted the drug addictions. You seemed to just brush over them too much.
You had good characters. The whole situation with Ryder was intense. I hate that he was such a bastard because that is actually one of my favorite names and I hate to see it used on such a psychotic scum bag. The good thing is that I like it spelled like; R Y D A. So it's OK. The name isn't ruined for me:)
Cool story line capturing the band and the sometimes tough journey to the top.
I like Sally. Good job writing:)
Really good story.
Some of these things weren't very realistic, like the way you depicted the drug addictions. You seemed to just brush over them too much.
You had good characters. The whole situation with Ryder was intense. I hate that he was such a bastard because that is actually one of my favorite names and I hate to see it used on such a psychotic scum bag. The good thing is that I like it spelled like; R Y D A. So it's OK. The name isn't ruined for me:)
Cool story line capturing the band and the sometimes tough journey to the top.
I like Sally. Good job writing:)
2/29/2008 c33 
1S. O'Terrick
ok, seriously the PERFECT way to end the story, as gross as a vomit kiss is. it's completely adorable.
and btw, i so totally WILL name my kid brent, just hoping that he'll take after his namesake lol.
there is absolutely nothing i would change about this... except the fact that it's the end of an awesome story... i always hate it when that happens :(
but on the other hand, you have now ACTUALLY FINISHED A STORY! GO YOU! and this is an amazing story. collective story kudos!
1S. O'Terrickok, seriously the PERFECT way to end the story, as gross as a vomit kiss is. it's completely adorable.
and btw, i so totally WILL name my kid brent, just hoping that he'll take after his namesake lol.
there is absolutely nothing i would change about this... except the fact that it's the end of an awesome story... i always hate it when that happens :(
but on the other hand, you have now ACTUALLY FINISHED A STORY! GO YOU! and this is an amazing story. collective story kudos!
2/29/2008 c32 S. O'Terrick
AW YAY!
that was so adorable. like seriously. so romantic and perfect for shooter and sally and this story. *claps hands in delight*
this makes me so happy!
AW YAY!
that was so adorable. like seriously. so romantic and perfect for shooter and sally and this story. *claps hands in delight*
this makes me so happy!
2/28/2008 c31 S. O'Terrick
they can't get divorced! *angry eyes*
but aside from the emotional issues, HILARIOUS chapter. green hair one-liners made my freaking night, and i loved the zeus reference haha... god i miss that little bastard...
i want to know what this plan is... and it better not be all vindictive and spiteful... it should bring the happy couple together... just a suggestion ;-)
they can't get divorced! *angry eyes*
but aside from the emotional issues, HILARIOUS chapter. green hair one-liners made my freaking night, and i loved the zeus reference haha... god i miss that little bastard...
i want to know what this plan is... and it better not be all vindictive and spiteful... it should bring the happy couple together... just a suggestion ;-)
2/27/2008 c30 S. O'Terrick
what? they aren't going to go through with it are they? they BETTER not... *glares*
very good chapter, though :)
what? they aren't going to go through with it are they? they BETTER not... *glares*
very good chapter, though :)
2/23/2008 c29 S. O'Terrick
i decided to get over the fact that you're a WHORE for doing that for one minute to give you a review...
this story USUALLY makes me really really happy and i even like all the drama except when you're being a WHORE and doing things to mess up shooter and sally's relationship...
anyway you better keep writing or i will hunt you down and MAKE you...
i decided to get over the fact that you're a WHORE for doing that for one minute to give you a review...
this story USUALLY makes me really really happy and i even like all the drama except when you're being a WHORE and doing things to mess up shooter and sally's relationship...
anyway you better keep writing or i will hunt you down and MAKE you...
12/31/2007 c28 1The Silent Messenger
I'm back from the grave to review! Those little speeches Michael and Shooter gave were really cute. :-) They made me smile. I can't wait for the next chapter!
1The Silent MessengerI'm back from the grave to review! Those little speeches Michael and Shooter gave were really cute. :-) They made me smile. I can't wait for the next chapter!
9/1/2007 c26 cofounder of anti-FFoWTAOT
wow! i love adam! officially. wow. fairy paintings. that's too funny. i wonder if they're paint by numbers...
wow! i love adam! officially. wow. fairy paintings. that's too funny. i wonder if they're paint by numbers...
7/22/2007 c18 coauthor of as the grass grows
so, that sounds like basically the best edding ever. the cream pie...pure genius!
i hope you write more about what happened to Molly! i miss her!
so, that sounds like basically the best edding ever. the cream pie...pure genius!
i hope you write more about what happened to Molly! i miss her!
7/16/2007 c16 coauthor of as the grass grows
oh no! molly can't leave! it makes me sad
but michael and kate are SO cute together. seriously, i love them.
and i hope sally assassinates ryder, the scumbag...
oh no! molly can't leave! it makes me sad
but michael and kate are SO cute together. seriously, i love them.
and i hope sally assassinates ryder, the scumbag...
7/11/2007 c2 Markus Ripley
Another great chapter, you should check out some of my work if you get a chance. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Another great chapter, you should check out some of my work if you get a chance. Anyway, keep up the good work.
7/9/2007 c13 10Thandiwe of the Theatre
Wow... this is a lot of romance even for me! I wouldn't have expected it of you, but I like it! Keep up the good work, I've been checking compulsively for new chapters.
10Thandiwe of the TheatreWow... this is a lot of romance even for me! I wouldn't have expected it of you, but I like it! Keep up the good work, I've been checking compulsively for new chapters.