
9/21/2007 c1
3Night-shifter
hey sweetie its jessie. who was this about? brittney? gosh, this was kinda deep. expression could have been a bit better. keep it real. peace!

hey sweetie its jessie. who was this about? brittney? gosh, this was kinda deep. expression could have been a bit better. keep it real. peace!
5/21/2007 c1
48The Reverse Edge Blade
I didn't quiet understand what to live to play has to do with friendship. Your way of expressing yourself in this poem could have been better.
The Reverse Edge Blade

I didn't quiet understand what to live to play has to do with friendship. Your way of expressing yourself in this poem could have been better.
The Reverse Edge Blade