
2/8/2014 c1 Sam
Oh my god, I feel like this puts my own personal feelings into words in a way.
You've done a wonderful job with this.
Oh my god, I feel like this puts my own personal feelings into words in a way.
You've done a wonderful job with this.
3/21/2010 c1 helzyeah
She craves her own white deathbed. She is only a slave to herself after all.
fan-bloody-fastic.
decribes my life to the t.
thanks
She craves her own white deathbed. She is only a slave to herself after all.
fan-bloody-fastic.
decribes my life to the t.
thanks
11/16/2008 c1 ghost of chrismas
I love the lines in italics.
I love the lines in italics.
3/27/2008 c1
5Sakiinyourdreams
Absolutely amazing. You really have a way with words in this piece. Keep it up. This is really great!

Absolutely amazing. You really have a way with words in this piece. Keep it up. This is really great!
7/24/2007 c1 Lustfully Enraged
She’s hooked on her own broken shards, constantly trying to put them together, when they’re letter left untouched. - should be BETTER left untouched.
She’s hooked on her own broken shards, constantly trying to put them together, when they’re letter left untouched. - should be BETTER left untouched.
7/21/2007 c1 squeeeee
Angsty... Who is this about if you don't mind me asking..
Angsty... Who is this about if you don't mind me asking..
7/14/2007 c1 Addy S
Are you okay now?
Are you okay now?
6/15/2007 c1 e
Your story conveys such intense feelings. Brilliant work! =)
Your story conveys such intense feelings. Brilliant work! =)
6/11/2007 c1
8jane speaks
Amazing. It is really sad how I can identify with this girl.
"She is a pathological liar, the best of indecision and more addictive than methamphetamine." I love this line.

Amazing. It is really sad how I can identify with this girl.
"She is a pathological liar, the best of indecision and more addictive than methamphetamine." I love this line.
5/22/2007 c1 Cassie
Deep!
Deep!
5/21/2007 c1 Nikita Johnson
Wonderful image painted.
Wonderful image painted.
5/21/2007 c1
17Murder245
I used to be like this. I'm so glad I'm not anymore.
Beautifully expressed.
~j. lynn

I used to be like this. I'm so glad I'm not anymore.
Beautifully expressed.
~j. lynn
5/21/2007 c1 Lori
wow. i love how it's so tragically poetic. best of luck!
wow. i love how it's so tragically poetic. best of luck!