10/2/2020 c1 Otakuami
So wonderful, the ending was the best outcome to my anticipation
So wonderful, the ending was the best outcome to my anticipation
8/27/2015 c1 Guest
hey i'm an Arianne too but heart this oneshot, can understand the dancing around each other :D
hey i'm an Arianne too but heart this oneshot, can understand the dancing around each other :D
5/25/2011 c1 16non.graceful
Cute.
I liked it because of the timeline between the two. Maybe you should have added more, instead of ending it and making it short
Cute.
I liked it because of the timeline between the two. Maybe you should have added more, instead of ending it and making it short
11/3/2010 c1 8Creative Pumpkin
AWESOME! although in the beginning the grades was a little confusing, but AWESOME ANYWAYS!
AWESOME! although in the beginning the grades was a little confusing, but AWESOME ANYWAYS!
9/25/2010 c1 Vanilla Chocola
I LOVE IT!
Ang galing nyo po!
Bigyan nyo po sana ako ng tips...
Hindi ko po kasi ma-put-to-words yung gusto ko pong isulat na storya ehh
Pero may plot na po ako... :(
Keep up the GOOD WORK po!
:D
I LOVE IT!
Ang galing nyo po!
Bigyan nyo po sana ako ng tips...
Hindi ko po kasi ma-put-to-words yung gusto ko pong isulat na storya ehh
Pero may plot na po ako... :(
Keep up the GOOD WORK po!
:D
10/23/2009 c1 candykillz
Wow. 3 years? That's a really long time. I love this, it's realistic and sweet!:)
Wow. 3 years? That's a really long time. I love this, it's realistic and sweet!:)
9/30/2009 c1 tin
HeLOO
im tin c. fr. the phil.
n i would like to suggest a story..
preferably characters named christine and michael as main character's names..
-i do love your stories,i can relate myself to it.
-they're awesome i must say..
:))
HeLOO
im tin c. fr. the phil.
n i would like to suggest a story..
preferably characters named christine and michael as main character's names..
-i do love your stories,i can relate myself to it.
-they're awesome i must say..
:))
11/17/2008 c1 hegberg
You can't say this is a One Shot, there is much more that can be said this is a great 1st chapter :).
You can't say this is a One Shot, there is much more that can be said this is a great 1st chapter :).
9/22/2008 c1 1OrangeStar13
wow. i liked that. :) i always do love one shots with such a sweet poignant message..
wow. i liked that. :) i always do love one shots with such a sweet poignant message..
6/19/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
I'm a bit confused. Is Grade Ten a senior? And Grade Nine a junior? Because in our society (American... West Coast, I guess?), Grade Ten is sophomore and Grade Nine is freshman.
Fluffy, yes, and I think the coincidence that they both think it's like a square moon is a bit of a stretch (unless he heard her?), but it's well-written and makes me feel a little fuzzy inside. (: I'm glad xoxluurve added it to our c2. (:
I'm a bit confused. Is Grade Ten a senior? And Grade Nine a junior? Because in our society (American... West Coast, I guess?), Grade Ten is sophomore and Grade Nine is freshman.
Fluffy, yes, and I think the coincidence that they both think it's like a square moon is a bit of a stretch (unless he heard her?), but it's well-written and makes me feel a little fuzzy inside. (: I'm glad xoxluurve added it to our c2. (:
6/16/2008 c1 7Let Them Eat Cake
Ah! Cute! The entire time, they were chasing each other only to find themselves finally talking at the Art Exhibit! Very nice! Good job!
=D
Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)
Ah! Cute! The entire time, they were chasing each other only to find themselves finally talking at the Art Exhibit! Very nice! Good job!
=D
Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)