for Stars and Windowsills8/25/2007 c1 
612simpleplan13
I like this.. the idea of clouds blockign stars is great... and the whole play on the concept of reaching for the stars is awesome.. its beautifully written and very bittersweet... I also like hte ending a lot.. slightly hopeful
612simpleplan13I like this.. the idea of clouds blockign stars is great... and the whole play on the concept of reaching for the stars is awesome.. its beautifully written and very bittersweet... I also like hte ending a lot.. slightly hopeful
6/19/2007 c1 1FoxStorm
My favorite poem by you. It really painted the picture for to see. I really love it.
1FoxStormMy favorite poem by you. It really painted the picture for to see. I really love it.
5/22/2007 c1 25cornered.sensations
You created such pretty images - 'skyline reflections of what you were always like' (I instantly thought of the perfectly arched back) and 'walking on tiptoes and balancing yourself on that single brittle starlight-starbeam.' It reminds me of the listlessness I used to dwell in when I was younger - when dreams were so close yet far. Great work
25cornered.sensationsYou created such pretty images - 'skyline reflections of what you were always like' (I instantly thought of the perfectly arched back) and 'walking on tiptoes and balancing yourself on that single brittle starlight-starbeam.' It reminds me of the listlessness I used to dwell in when I was younger - when dreams were so close yet far. Great work