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3/13/2008 c1 24BrokenHeart4Eva
i love the imagery in this one. its beautiful and captivating
10/12/2007 c1 11Bright Green
such lovely imagery and such a lovely concept
8/25/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this.. the idea of clouds blockign stars is great... and the whole play on the concept of reaching for the stars is awesome.. its beautifully written and very bittersweet... I also like hte ending a lot.. slightly hopeful
6/19/2007 c1 1FoxStorm
My favorite poem by you. It really painted the picture for to see. I really love it.
5/22/2007 c1 25cornered.sensations
You created such pretty images - 'skyline reflections of what you were always like' (I instantly thought of the perfectly arched back) and 'walking on tiptoes and balancing yourself on that single brittle starlight-starbeam.' It reminds me of the listlessness I used to dwell in when I was younger - when dreams were so close yet far. Great work
5/21/2007 c1 306Ashelin
This was really sad, and amazingly beautiful. The metaphors you used, and just the images you created were wonderful. This was beautiful. Great job.

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