for Dragons Are Such A Beauty5/22/2007 c1 
65Nemonus
Clumsy. Some bits in the middle ("see them breathe") are okay description, but your rhythm isn't. I can see this more as an essay than a poem.
65NemonusClumsy. Some bits in the middle ("see them breathe") are okay description, but your rhythm isn't. I can see this more as an essay than a poem.
5/21/2007 c1 49The Reverse Edge Blade
Great job! Once again, your skill to describe well! You always makes it so easy to imagine!
The Reverse Edge Blade
49The Reverse Edge BladeGreat job! Once again, your skill to describe well! You always makes it so easy to imagine!
The Reverse Edge Blade