for Waking Up8/29/2012 c1 Robin
AWWWWWWWWWWWW haha :)
AWWWWWWWWWWWW haha :)
1/30/2011 c1 WishBlade
Yes, it was cliche-but honestly, who doesn't like cliches? I, for one, was smiling like an idiot by the end because it was so adorable =]
Yes, it was cliche-but honestly, who doesn't like cliches? I, for one, was smiling like an idiot by the end because it was so adorable =]
12/22/2010 c1 
4Kina Kalamari
Short, yes. Cheesy, yes. Good...also yes. It's an interesting idea that I've never seen before. I can't decide if it'd make a very interesting longer story or a very boring longer story, but it made for a nice oneshot. =)
4Kina KalamariShort, yes. Cheesy, yes. Good...also yes. It's an interesting idea that I've never seen before. I can't decide if it'd make a very interesting longer story or a very boring longer story, but it made for a nice oneshot. =)
12/13/2010 c1 2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
I really like the concept of the story however, the ending was a big let down. I think you need to include why , and this is going to sound stupid, they got together and the actual scene they get together it. It just feels unfinished.
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiCI really like the concept of the story however, the ending was a big let down. I think you need to include why , and this is going to sound stupid, they got together and the actual scene they get together it. It just feels unfinished.
9/27/2010 c1 9Inkpress00
Love it! Although, you did spell his name a different way in the beginning... other than that, though, very well done.
9Inkpress00Love it! Although, you did spell his name a different way in the beginning... other than that, though, very well done.
8/25/2010 c1 1x Farii
Awwr! Amazing :')
Gorgeous writing.
And we could all do a little bit of cheesy once in a while (;
And yes, i'm stalking your fictionpress account.
Amazing stories
1x FariiAwwr! Amazing :')
Gorgeous writing.
And we could all do a little bit of cheesy once in a while (;
And yes, i'm stalking your fictionpress account.
Amazing stories
5/12/2010 c1 teardropsONroses
okay since you've probably gotten a billion emails saying I added most of your stories to my favorites i figured i should say why:
they're all really really cute
and some of them are bordering on cliche but not enough to make them predictable
pretty!
okay since you've probably gotten a billion emails saying I added most of your stories to my favorites i figured i should say why:
they're all really really cute
and some of them are bordering on cliche but not enough to make them predictable
pretty!
3/23/2010 c1 Crystal Marie
I've noticed a lot of your stories end with 'yeah, that was cheesy and cliche'' And you REALLY have to stop that. Us hopeless, helpless romantics find it sweet (heck, I found the shortened version of Romeo and Juliet sweet) and I don't like 'hearing' you think you're too cheesy. Write a full length and get it published... because YOU COULD. GREAT story and, once again, my heart swelled. I've noticed your stories leave a lot to the imagination. I was wondering if you ever thought of turning them into full length stories...? I can't decide if they're better when left for us to decide the rest or what, but I think they'd make fantastic long-term stories. Just saying. =-) Fantastic job! ~Crystal Marie
I've noticed a lot of your stories end with 'yeah, that was cheesy and cliche'' And you REALLY have to stop that. Us hopeless, helpless romantics find it sweet (heck, I found the shortened version of Romeo and Juliet sweet) and I don't like 'hearing' you think you're too cheesy. Write a full length and get it published... because YOU COULD. GREAT story and, once again, my heart swelled. I've noticed your stories leave a lot to the imagination. I was wondering if you ever thought of turning them into full length stories...? I can't decide if they're better when left for us to decide the rest or what, but I think they'd make fantastic long-term stories. Just saying. =-) Fantastic job! ~Crystal Marie
3/20/2009 c1 13blurrylights
You really are good with names. I loved this...*sigh* Absolutely adorable.
13blurrylightsYou really are good with names. I loved this...*sigh* Absolutely adorable.