for Entangled Love5/20/2014 c1 FlowersBite
aww I hate to see or read people cry always makes me teary, cheer up it'll get better for you 'sniff sniff'
aww I hate to see or read people cry always makes me teary, cheer up it'll get better for you 'sniff sniff'
4/19/2009 c4 
2Keona Raynalise
Can u update again? This is a GREAT story and i REALLY wanna find out wut happenes next!
2Keona RaynaliseCan u update again? This is a GREAT story and i REALLY wanna find out wut happenes next!
6/4/2008 c4 navajo
interesting story cant wait to see if Julius will find another interest or be hung up on kellan
interesting story cant wait to see if Julius will find another interest or be hung up on kellan
1/15/2008 c1 24Limited Edition
Haha I like this story. It's amusing. I think what you should improve when you're rewriting it, is to not be so bored of it, because it shines through.
24Limited EditionHaha I like this story. It's amusing. I think what you should improve when you're rewriting it, is to not be so bored of it, because it shines through.
12/7/2007 c3 Meri
hmm strangely enough about halfway through the second chappie I started rooting for Julius and Ethan...why i don't knwo but it just seemed right to me...which is weird cuase you'd think of craig rather then ethan one would think but eh...maybe i'm just weird..anywho great story so far and can't wait to see how it all turns out.
hmm strangely enough about halfway through the second chappie I started rooting for Julius and Ethan...why i don't knwo but it just seemed right to me...which is weird cuase you'd think of craig rather then ethan one would think but eh...maybe i'm just weird..anywho great story so far and can't wait to see how it all turns out.
10/2/2007 c3 2Saint Anger
nice start to a story. i want to see where this is going. i assume kellan and julius will get together some time in the near future? i hope so anyway. i'm looking forward to an update
2Saint Angernice start to a story. i want to see where this is going. i assume kellan and julius will get together some time in the near future? i hope so anyway. i'm looking forward to an update
9/29/2007 c3 35AmnesiaCoat
Hmm... Craig and Julius fooling around sounds quite funny, though the Kellan and Julius might turn angsty. I suggest you avoid that unless that's what your aiming for. Anyway yeah, I like it!
35AmnesiaCoatHmm... Craig and Julius fooling around sounds quite funny, though the Kellan and Julius might turn angsty. I suggest you avoid that unless that's what your aiming for. Anyway yeah, I like it!
9/12/2007 c3 5Amerez
hey, cute story. I can't decide if I like Craig and Julius or Kellan and Julius, but I Craig's adorable and that would be cute. We don't know much about Kellan, and I mean, he went out with his sister, ouch.
5Amerezhey, cute story. I can't decide if I like Craig and Julius or Kellan and Julius, but I Craig's adorable and that would be cute. We don't know much about Kellan, and I mean, he went out with his sister, ouch.
7/31/2007 c2 6Tara Brookswell
just got into the story tonight and loved it! good for julius for comin out of the closet! my bff nikolai is gay. so is my friend jerry. love both of them! nikolai is the outfit coordinator, jerry does my hair and makeup. id be so helpless w/o them! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
6Tara Brookswelljust got into the story tonight and loved it! good for julius for comin out of the closet! my bff nikolai is gay. so is my friend jerry. love both of them! nikolai is the outfit coordinator, jerry does my hair and makeup. id be so helpless w/o them! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
6/4/2007 c2 5Violet Beatrice Baudelaire
This just gets better! Can't wait for the next instalment. Slash between two best friends?Carmen's a nice name , I'm not sure about the name Caleb, what about.. Carey? Or does that just sound like a girl's name...
5Violet Beatrice BaudelaireThis just gets better! Can't wait for the next instalment. Slash between two best friends?Carmen's a nice name , I'm not sure about the name Caleb, what about.. Carey? Or does that just sound like a girl's name...
6/4/2007 c2 9lost2me
wow, okay i'm still rly interested so...lets hear more! As for your request for a beta-reader, I'm not sure what that is and I know that you had someone else offer but if it's proof reading I'm relatively good at English so if you still need someone let me know!
9lost2mewow, okay i'm still rly interested so...lets hear more! As for your request for a beta-reader, I'm not sure what that is and I know that you had someone else offer but if it's proof reading I'm relatively good at English so if you still need someone let me know!
6/3/2007 c2 1Rajini
A great second chapter. I think you're really good at writing, it reads easy. It is also fun to read it.
If you need a beta-reader, you should really look for someone you can use and who has time for it. I like to do so (I'm a beta reader for more writers, yay me =^-^=) I'm not really good at writing myself as I always get bored with my own story.
I want to try to be your beta-reader, if you would like that. People say I'm good at it. Maybe you can try me?
Just mail me when you want to.
And write back soon!
Rajini
1RajiniA great second chapter. I think you're really good at writing, it reads easy. It is also fun to read it.
If you need a beta-reader, you should really look for someone you can use and who has time for it. I like to do so (I'm a beta reader for more writers, yay me =^-^=) I'm not really good at writing myself as I always get bored with my own story.
I want to try to be your beta-reader, if you would like that. People say I'm good at it. Maybe you can try me?
Just mail me when you want to.
And write back soon!
Rajini