for Out At Home9/10/2008 c22 greenbean
wow your story had just the right amount of drama..extremely good I love all of your stories! of course some of the characters sometimes piss you off everynow and then...but that is what makes a great story...dont worry then dont piss me off to much..just the right amount. Keep up the good work.
wow your story had just the right amount of drama..extremely good I love all of your stories! of course some of the characters sometimes piss you off everynow and then...but that is what makes a great story...dont worry then dont piss me off to much..just the right amount. Keep up the good work.
8/21/2008 c22 
4KT Writes
I absolutely love your characters - not just in this story but in all of them. You have such a way with putting the reader right in the character's head. Your stories are always very emotional with just the right blend of romance, drama and angst. I especially love how the secondary characters aren't just one-dimensional paper dolls. You give them personality. Reading any one of your stories always puts me in a better mood. Thanks.
4KT WritesI absolutely love your characters - not just in this story but in all of them. You have such a way with putting the reader right in the character's head. Your stories are always very emotional with just the right blend of romance, drama and angst. I especially love how the secondary characters aren't just one-dimensional paper dolls. You give them personality. Reading any one of your stories always puts me in a better mood. Thanks.
4/16/2008 c22 Genato
hm.. the story is good but some of the parts happened too fast. you have to slow down and let it progress naturally or some sh*t like that. lol. it was just.. a bit abrupt in between chapters. and it was so short.. i wanted more, woman! lol. but great job and improve.
.. i just checked out your profile and saw that it was your first story. scratch what i said. for a first story in fp, it was great.
hm.. the story is good but some of the parts happened too fast. you have to slow down and let it progress naturally or some sh*t like that. lol. it was just.. a bit abrupt in between chapters. and it was so short.. i wanted more, woman! lol. but great job and improve.
.. i just checked out your profile and saw that it was your first story. scratch what i said. for a first story in fp, it was great.