for Sand Trap6/18/2007 c3 Cracked Mirror Image
...good but...um...ok...not really the usual kind of thing i read...but...its good writing...*shivers*...
...good but...um...ok...not really the usual kind of thing i read...but...its good writing...*shivers*...
6/4/2007 c2 random person
love it! update soon
love it! update soon
6/2/2007 c2 
4Georgianna
That was incredible.
Chills went up my spine when I read this, which I suppose is the desired effect.
I also like how there is some comic relief, like when he says he wants a limo when he becomes famous.
Fantastic story, please keep it up!
4GeorgiannaThat was incredible.
Chills went up my spine when I read this, which I suppose is the desired effect.
I also like how there is some comic relief, like when he says he wants a limo when he becomes famous.
Fantastic story, please keep it up!
5/28/2007 c2 Cracked Mirror Image
u depress me...but its good...but do u really think that someone would hate there mom if she threatened to kill them just to shut them up?...i wouldn't...but...maybe someone else would...idk...
its good...keep writing
u depress me...but its good...but do u really think that someone would hate there mom if she threatened to kill them just to shut them up?...i wouldn't...but...maybe someone else would...idk...
its good...keep writing