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6/17/2007 c1 72Definition
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Wow. This is so powerful and incaptivating. Your style and use of italics/bolds/underlines/etc. is so original and breathtaking.

I have to add you as a fav. author. :O
6/5/2007 c1 107ash the arsnist
another powerful piece. i feel like there's a lot of you in this one (not that there isn't in every piece) but something just stands out to me...makes me feel so many different things. “carelessness thrown around with a little bit of truth” ... reminds me in a way of how people say hurtful things when they're mad without the slightest care... but somehow you know its the truth. i believe you have a truly beautiful and unique voice and ive come to admire your work and appreciate your feedback on my own pieces. never stop writing, we would be losing something great if you ever did.
5/24/2007 c1 19VIOLENTLYmistaken
I love the bitterness behind this. And you couldn't have ended it any better:

"superficially yours superficially mine

timed ending to our lives"
5/24/2007 c1 kiss the bruises
how on EARTH can you say that my poems are good when your's are AMAZING?

"we've turned into another cliché heartbreak lovesong"
5/24/2007 c1 Tytherpol
i like the flow of this one.

it's very beautiful.

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