for Upon My Beloved's Grave11/25/2007 c1 
5Lizzy-Lou
So, I'm not usually one to read poetry, but I enjoyed "The Raven" very much, so I thought I'd go ahead and give this a read. I really enjoyed it, very good word choice and basically just a great poem! Good work!
5Lizzy-LouSo, I'm not usually one to read poetry, but I enjoyed "The Raven" very much, so I thought I'd go ahead and give this a read. I really enjoyed it, very good word choice and basically just a great poem! Good work!
8/18/2007 c1 61Dani P
very nice i like this. i love the raven so its good to see someone use it as inspiration and make something of there own.
61Dani Pvery nice i like this. i love the raven so its good to see someone use it as inspiration and make something of there own.
6/26/2007 c1 45Lyrena
Wonderful old world feel. I like the rhyme scheme immensely, except for the very end, where it deviates. It sticks out a bit.
I had to look up nympholept, and then in turn, nympholepsy. : D
I learned a new word.
45LyrenaWonderful old world feel. I like the rhyme scheme immensely, except for the very end, where it deviates. It sticks out a bit.
I had to look up nympholept, and then in turn, nympholepsy. : D
I learned a new word.
6/3/2007 c1 26Angela Dawne
Nifty!
I do see striking similarities between it and The Raven.
Especially the presence of a raven. Ha, ha!
Irony can make terrible things funny. I don't like reading books about death, but I guess I'd find one about ironic deaths hysterical. Yikes.
Only one error I spotted at the bottom: bringing my error to my attnetion.
Which is another ironic thing that brings hilarity to my dull life.
Good work.
26Angela DawneNifty!
I do see striking similarities between it and The Raven.
Especially the presence of a raven. Ha, ha!
Irony can make terrible things funny. I don't like reading books about death, but I guess I'd find one about ironic deaths hysterical. Yikes.
Only one error I spotted at the bottom: bringing my error to my attnetion.
Which is another ironic thing that brings hilarity to my dull life.
Good work.
5/27/2007 c1 14Night Play
i know., you want me to review. xD
this made me sad.
but then
happy, becuase she died. rofl. Idk, i like how it rhymed but then didn't. I kept having to change how i was reading it though~ and I liket he Raven, it reminds me of your name. Elegant Raven. :) haha..yeah, im lame.
lata.
14Night Playi know., you want me to review. xD
this made me sad.
but then
happy, becuase she died. rofl. Idk, i like how it rhymed but then didn't. I kept having to change how i was reading it though~ and I liket he Raven, it reminds me of your name. Elegant Raven. :) haha..yeah, im lame.
lata.
5/26/2007 c1 6violent affectionist
mm..i like this.
particularly "mourning, lost in nostalgic lullabies as i gaze upon the transept.
your good at rhyming peotry.
not a lot of people are.
iProps.
love, v. affectionist.
6violent affectionistmm..i like this.
particularly "mourning, lost in nostalgic lullabies as i gaze upon the transept.
your good at rhyming peotry.
not a lot of people are.
iProps.
love, v. affectionist.
5/26/2007 c1 14Ever The Great Fool
Nice! I like this one. The emotions are portrayed well, and good use of vocabulary too. Although, I'm a little lost on the concept. Maybe I should read "The Raven" =)
14Ever The Great FoolNice! I like this one. The emotions are portrayed well, and good use of vocabulary too. Although, I'm a little lost on the concept. Maybe I should read "The Raven" =)
5/25/2007 c1 15NekoKaji
First of all... It looks more like ABAA to me :P However, other than that little nit-picky thing I just pointed out... It's absolutely lovely! I adore the use of words, the beautiful imagery, and the story-like setting of the poem. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous! It's been quite a while since I've seen such extremely well written, well thought out poetry. You have done Poe proud, I think :)
Take care & keep writing!
-NK
15NekoKajiFirst of all... It looks more like ABAA to me :P However, other than that little nit-picky thing I just pointed out... It's absolutely lovely! I adore the use of words, the beautiful imagery, and the story-like setting of the poem. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous! It's been quite a while since I've seen such extremely well written, well thought out poetry. You have done Poe proud, I think :)
Take care & keep writing!
-NK