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5/26/2007 c1 3TheWhimsicalTruth
I liked the prologue. The story seems promising. =)

I don't know if it's realistic that the boy already decides right then to make his mother proud of him, because in a situation like that people usually have a hard time grasping what has happened. But, that's just my opinion.

Anyways... Interested in seeing how the story will continue. =)

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