for Ambivalence5/27/2007 c1 
8Sundown
When it comes to this site, I am a serious skimmer...and not much has hit out at me lately. I took a chance on this piece and I am thrilled that I did. I loved it! I didn't lose concentration at all! It was written well and I had this image of the beautiful boy in my mind the whole time, and it actually made me smile. I like how it was confronting...but in a subtle way. Excellent piece...are you going to leave it as a one shot or are you going to continue anywhere? the piece is strong enough to go either way. Well done!
8SundownWhen it comes to this site, I am a serious skimmer...and not much has hit out at me lately. I took a chance on this piece and I am thrilled that I did. I loved it! I didn't lose concentration at all! It was written well and I had this image of the beautiful boy in my mind the whole time, and it actually made me smile. I like how it was confronting...but in a subtle way. Excellent piece...are you going to leave it as a one shot or are you going to continue anywhere? the piece is strong enough to go either way. Well done!