
5/26/2007 c1
131theory of black
this made me smile. haikus can be so sweet and innocent and you really captured this very well. i love the visual (and it also helps that i've recently fallen in love with the ocean again :] )
fantastic.

this made me smile. haikus can be so sweet and innocent and you really captured this very well. i love the visual (and it also helps that i've recently fallen in love with the ocean again :] )
fantastic.
5/26/2007 c1
174a silenced revolution
"Playfully divine". What a beautiful line. (Hey, that rhymed.) Nice haiku.

"Playfully divine". What a beautiful line. (Hey, that rhymed.) Nice haiku.