
6/27/2007 c1
45Lyrena
I'm not a fan of slash (not that I hate it, I do enjoy the occasional Harry/Draco slash in fanfiction) but this was definitely readable.
One confusion I had was with point of view when it came to using the term the other. I was unable to tell who it was reffering to, but perhaps thats the point? Being unsure of where one ends and another begins?

I'm not a fan of slash (not that I hate it, I do enjoy the occasional Harry/Draco slash in fanfiction) but this was definitely readable.
One confusion I had was with point of view when it came to using the term the other. I was unable to tell who it was reffering to, but perhaps thats the point? Being unsure of where one ends and another begins?
5/27/2007 c1
19jus-me
Wow...definately not what I was expecting?
And despite its graphic nature...it works well.
You built the desire...and then managed to let it go slowly but surely.
Well done.

Wow...definately not what I was expecting?
And despite its graphic nature...it works well.
You built the desire...and then managed to let it go slowly but surely.
Well done.