for Everlasting4/27/2011 c1 Jeng
Nice one! touchy :)
Nice one! touchy :)
6/28/2007 c1 
332smile for the sunshine
Aw. That was really cute. I love the way that you evoked so much emotion into a small space. It really was beautiful. I feel that way sometimes...Although I have never cheated on anyone, I just cause them pain and in return I am amazed when they embrace me...Nonetheless, excellent work.
332smile for the sunshineAw. That was really cute. I love the way that you evoked so much emotion into a small space. It really was beautiful. I feel that way sometimes...Although I have never cheated on anyone, I just cause them pain and in return I am amazed when they embrace me...Nonetheless, excellent work.
6/27/2007 c1 306Ashelin
I really enjoyed the imagery and feelings in this poem. I especially loved the line "Even though your tears stained my fingertips". It was just a wonderful image, like eye candy. Haha. But anyway, great job, it was quite beautiful and hopeful.
306AshelinI really enjoyed the imagery and feelings in this poem. I especially loved the line "Even though your tears stained my fingertips". It was just a wonderful image, like eye candy. Haha. But anyway, great job, it was quite beautiful and hopeful.
6/27/2007 c1 829Anaare
A good poem, which I have enjoyed reading. It needed some time to "build", but it ends strongly and with a good rhythm. Some wonderful imagery, here. All in all, good work and best wishes.
829AnaareA good poem, which I have enjoyed reading. It needed some time to "build", but it ends strongly and with a good rhythm. Some wonderful imagery, here. All in all, good work and best wishes.
6/27/2007 c1 22L. Lazuli
strong imagery! the flowing emotions of this piece absorbs the reader like the current of a river. i like it. great piece! keep it up!
Carpe Diem.
-llazuli-
22L. Lazulistrong imagery! the flowing emotions of this piece absorbs the reader like the current of a river. i like it. great piece! keep it up!
Carpe Diem.
-llazuli-
6/25/2007 c1 MeiLeeCalifornia
I liked the strong imagery especially in the first stanza (ok, newbie poet here, so don't know the official title for sections...). The picture you described in it created a great atmospheric setting for the rest of your poem!
I liked the strong imagery especially in the first stanza (ok, newbie poet here, so don't know the official title for sections...). The picture you described in it created a great atmospheric setting for the rest of your poem!
6/6/2007 c1 violent affectionist
hello there. i know you replied to me a long time ago, but i can't quite figure out how to check it..
this though, this poem..
speaks wonders in itself. i enjoy it.
you are indeed quite the talent. i like "i had broken your soul into splinters of crystal". :]
love, v. affectionist.
hello there. i know you replied to me a long time ago, but i can't quite figure out how to check it..
this though, this poem..
speaks wonders in itself. i enjoy it.
you are indeed quite the talent. i like "i had broken your soul into splinters of crystal". :]
love, v. affectionist.