for Not Another Sob Story4/2/2017 c1 otakuami
Ohh, this is a good one-shot, but, Damn, I am left wanting for more for something to happen between them...3
Ohh, this is a good one-shot, but, Damn, I am left wanting for more for something to happen between them...3
6/27/2014 c1 Artemis
Ah, loved it. Quite the writer, you are, you know. Incredible. What are you waiting for- a cookie? Go write another one!
You're good, thanks for sharing the story. ;)
Ah, loved it. Quite the writer, you are, you know. Incredible. What are you waiting for- a cookie? Go write another one!
You're good, thanks for sharing the story. ;)
11/17/2012 c1 heal me forever
WTFFFFFFFF gosh ,..its cute nd all but nxt BAM ! no final thing gosh sequeal plz ?
WTFFFFFFFF gosh ,..its cute nd all but nxt BAM ! no final thing gosh sequeal plz ?
2/1/2011 c1 
2elma
Oho I liked it! I wish there was more :) so I could see whether it would ever really work out or not haha.
By the way, the cookie reference. Ingenious how you added it! I didn't recognise it as a reference at all! - And I've read a couple of fics for this bite requirement thing. :)
2elmaOho I liked it! I wish there was more :) so I could see whether it would ever really work out or not haha.
By the way, the cookie reference. Ingenious how you added it! I didn't recognise it as a reference at all! - And I've read a couple of fics for this bite requirement thing. :)
10/7/2010 c1 2Unwritten.prose
I kind of want to tear your eyeballs out of their sockets with gleaming pairs of garden shears for leaving a hopeful reader like myself pondering the outcome of their little love story, but I also know that had you given this story a solid ending, I would have dismissed it as yet another cliched story with nothing particularly outstanding about it.
So basically, what I was trying to convey through my semi-violent review/comment thing on your story is that I really, really enjoyed it, every single aspect of it, and though it pains me to say this, the bittersweet aspect of it was my favourite part of the story. Rest assured that my violent threats are usually not carried out.
2Unwritten.proseI kind of want to tear your eyeballs out of their sockets with gleaming pairs of garden shears for leaving a hopeful reader like myself pondering the outcome of their little love story, but I also know that had you given this story a solid ending, I would have dismissed it as yet another cliched story with nothing particularly outstanding about it.
So basically, what I was trying to convey through my semi-violent review/comment thing on your story is that I really, really enjoyed it, every single aspect of it, and though it pains me to say this, the bittersweet aspect of it was my favourite part of the story. Rest assured that my violent threats are usually not carried out.
6/14/2010 c1 7Salt and Vinegar Pringles
so lovely, and yet really bittersweet. i really hope that in fiction-land, they realise that they're both in love with one another and yay happy ending!
7Salt and Vinegar Pringlesso lovely, and yet really bittersweet. i really hope that in fiction-land, they realise that they're both in love with one another and yay happy ending!
5/16/2010 c1 Anon
I have to say this is one of the funniest short stories I have ever read - thanks for making my day! Well-written, bitey (pun intended) and so incredibly real.
Excellent.
I have to say this is one of the funniest short stories I have ever read - thanks for making my day! Well-written, bitey (pun intended) and so incredibly real.
Excellent.
5/8/2010 c1 2addisonj
I really like this. Smart, funny, the two different voices are distinct enough. Very good.
2addisonjI really like this. Smart, funny, the two different voices are distinct enough. Very good.
4/6/2010 c1 Rembaud
This was great :) I really enjoyed the varied personalities and not-so-happy ending. Good work!
This was great :) I really enjoyed the varied personalities and not-so-happy ending. Good work!
4/2/2008 c1 Aimers
Again, love it. Especially the fact that there's not solid conclusion between the two, and so it's not ULTRA cliched. :D
Again, love it. Especially the fact that there's not solid conclusion between the two, and so it's not ULTRA cliched. :D
3/9/2008 c1 Boo
that's kind of a dark humour, really it's a pity they don't get together at the end of the story T_T
that's kind of a dark humour, really it's a pity they don't get together at the end of the story T_T