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10/18/2013 c13 aircutter360
This is a great story. I hope to read more soon.
6/17/2012 c13 2OrangeKiss
Hey! This story is amazing. Please continue writing! I noticed it was 5 years ago when this story was last updated, but we, your readers, are still very much hoping for your next chapter. Please, write more for this. Thank you.

-OrangeKiss
9/3/2011 c13 The Critic
The summary is very misleading.

"Protected by one pack sought after by another."

1. I don't see this girl being searched for by another pack, and there are no REAL scenes that show her being protected.

"The King of the Lykae will stop at nothing to have the perfect mate."

2. He already got her and she doesn't show any progress of trying to leave/escape. Your sentence tells the reader that the girl doesn't want to go or be with the Lykae king.

These two sentences are the main reason why I wanted to check out this story in the first place. I don't want to sound mean or "flaming' but I was very disappointed to find out that the summary, at least to me, was misleading.
12/10/2010 c13 1SecretRose88
Well, she's doing a lot better than I would be. I probably would have used the clothes he gave me to try to strangle him or to tie a noose for myself. Even little old human me wouldn't want to be stuck in a cage.
1/5/2010 c13 1Panda Blitz
Enough of the damn cages! I would flip if I was locked in a room! I love the story! please update soon!
12/4/2009 c13 7smurf-love
haha i love this story, i will enjoy reading the chapters to come...

~smurf~
10/23/2009 c13 3M.Bianca
there's something called spell check. use it!
10/22/2009 c13 Arisa
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't give up on this story!
9/19/2009 c13 A-No-Knee-Moose
oh my word i just saw your last update date. PLEASE dont let this die this fic is amazing and i would worship the words you type. i sound freaky, okay wahtever. PLEASE UPDATE i am addicted, i love your writing style. you have a talent
9/4/2009 c13 MaxMcDowell
Please Up date soon I really can't wait to read more.

(I have been waiting for a long time too) :(
8/5/2009 c1 Kirsten
i've recently begun to read your story 'By the Moon' and so far it's wonderful! i hope you continue it; please do :)
6/27/2009 c13 Isabella Western
COOL
3/12/2009 c1 2Deanna-Marie
Lovely.

I laughed a little at the names, hope you don't mind.

They were pleasantly unusual. But the name Gau made me laugh.

The first time I read it, I said 'goo' =D

Nicely written. I would love to see more description and setting detail. Otherwise, it’s lovely.

Keep writing

-Deanna
1/11/2009 c12 KittyKatLover
I can't believe I just got really into this story and you stopped updating it over a year ago!...

Please please please magically come back and update!
1/11/2009 c13 KittyKatLover
Very good so far... update soon!
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