12/30/2008 c13 4rae12391
I like this story and how you wrote it. I like that you didn't rush into the romance and make it an over night switch from hate to love. You should update really soon. It seems the angry towns people are getting...well...angry.GRAB THE PITCH FORKS!
I like this story and how you wrote it. I like that you didn't rush into the romance and make it an over night switch from hate to love. You should update really soon. It seems the angry towns people are getting...well...angry.GRAB THE PITCH FORKS!
12/15/2008 c13 4Kimera77
Great story! Nice character development. I would love to see some Rayne/Kedyn action soon! Update asap!
Great story! Nice character development. I would love to see some Rayne/Kedyn action soon! Update asap!
12/11/2008 c13 1miss.venerable
Wow, I really enjoyed this story. It was a rather unique twist on a mostly-overdone plotline, but you managed to do it well. I wish you'd update it, but I guess if it's not gonna happen then no problem. I enjoyed it all the same. :)
Wow, I really enjoyed this story. It was a rather unique twist on a mostly-overdone plotline, but you managed to do it well. I wish you'd update it, but I guess if it's not gonna happen then no problem. I enjoyed it all the same. :)
8/1/2008 c13 Dannika
I actually like Kedyn! I know what he's going through, and sure he's unsure right now, about her, but it's obvious they're gonna hook up! Just, please don't put her with those two pups or with Ruric, (whatevr his name is) :)
Thanks!
Dannika,
Ps. You're a good writer!
I actually like Kedyn! I know what he's going through, and sure he's unsure right now, about her, but it's obvious they're gonna hook up! Just, please don't put her with those two pups or with Ruric, (whatevr his name is) :)
Thanks!
Dannika,
Ps. You're a good writer!
7/15/2008 c13 Madame MEB
I love this story. It's great! I especially like the last line of this chapter: "Trading one cage for another." It intrigues me in some way...the simplicity and "duh-factor" (for lack of a better word) of it all? I dunno. Keep up the fantastic work!
I love this story. It's great! I especially like the last line of this chapter: "Trading one cage for another." It intrigues me in some way...the simplicity and "duh-factor" (for lack of a better word) of it all? I dunno. Keep up the fantastic work!
6/24/2008 c13 Meg
seriously Kedyn should die, i hate him. It seems like you want to write them together but at the same time you don't...i hope its don't. lol
I feel like she should escape and kill of kedyn and then take another mate lol even warewolves should have free will!
seriously Kedyn should die, i hate him. It seems like you want to write them together but at the same time you don't...i hope its don't. lol
I feel like she should escape and kill of kedyn and then take another mate lol even warewolves should have free will!
6/20/2008 c13 ChristianAngel01
Wow! I just love this!
Please continue I cant wait to read the next chapter and many more to come I hope :D
Wow! I just love this!
Please continue I cant wait to read the next chapter and many more to come I hope :D
3/9/2008 c13 jess
wow it's been awhile
wow it's been awhile
1/5/2008 c13 4Ck90
Poor Kedyn, i feel bad for him. It must be frustrating wanting to be with that person and not being acknoweledged, but then again some men never know the right way of approaching the object of their afrection. Does she now anything about mates at all? She must have seen it n the wolf pack right? U€pdate Soon!
Poor Kedyn, i feel bad for him. It must be frustrating wanting to be with that person and not being acknoweledged, but then again some men never know the right way of approaching the object of their afrection. Does she now anything about mates at all? She must have seen it n the wolf pack right? U€pdate Soon!