for Sleeping Hope3/12/2020 c1 Otakuami
This broke my heart into pieces. The way he's such a carefree guy and likes to play around with her is endearing to watch.
And how he discovers things about her (albeit not by normal means) and he is fascinated by 'Hope' is really funny to read. It also shows that Hope has a character of her own. She's not just a sarcastic or quirky girl. Her character has been developed to. Would love to see Jeremiah's weaknesses and insecurities though.
This broke my heart into pieces. The way he's such a carefree guy and likes to play around with her is endearing to watch.
And how he discovers things about her (albeit not by normal means) and he is fascinated by 'Hope' is really funny to read. It also shows that Hope has a character of her own. She's not just a sarcastic or quirky girl. Her character has been developed to. Would love to see Jeremiah's weaknesses and insecurities though.
5/20/2013 c1 Guest
OMG why so saaad! ;;
OMG why so saaad! ;;
8/25/2012 c1 
2loveofallthatisawesome
Am I the only one who interpreted the ending as her dying of old age? I mean, I don't know exactly how you, the author, meant for it to be taken, but I assumed, because he said 'she made my life a dream', that he got married with her and grew old with her and eventually life took its toll on her and she died peacefully in her sleep.
I like that best. Well, great story, I think the main characters were awesome and I'm glad they got to experience life together.
2loveofallthatisawesomeAm I the only one who interpreted the ending as her dying of old age? I mean, I don't know exactly how you, the author, meant for it to be taken, but I assumed, because he said 'she made my life a dream', that he got married with her and grew old with her and eventually life took its toll on her and she died peacefully in her sleep.
I like that best. Well, great story, I think the main characters were awesome and I'm glad they got to experience life together.
11/12/2011 c1 3dawnita
wait. whaaat? she died?
that's just ... aww, why? but i liked how he kind of accepted it ... but still ...
aww, it was really sad and sweet. i did not expect that at all ... i thought that her brother might have died or something ...
:( really sad
- d.
3dawnitawait. whaaat? she died?
that's just ... aww, why? but i liked how he kind of accepted it ... but still ...
aww, it was really sad and sweet. i did not expect that at all ... i thought that her brother might have died or something ...
:( really sad
- d.
8/26/2011 c1 Gizmos
... Why? Why did it end so sadly? I feel like crying now that was such a nice story. Next time, how about a happier ending? Okay? Thanks.
... Why? Why did it end so sadly? I feel like crying now that was such a nice story. Next time, how about a happier ending? Okay? Thanks.
7/24/2011 c1 Andrea
That was one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading. I usually only like stories with happy endings, but this story was so touching and... Well im not sure how to discribe it but I really liked it. Thankyou for writing it.
That was one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading. I usually only like stories with happy endings, but this story was so touching and... Well im not sure how to discribe it but I really liked it. Thankyou for writing it.
6/24/2011 c1 copperxoxo
I really love it , it's a bit to sad for my liking and i have this urge to cry right now :$
Your character development is amazing, and you really know how to tell a wonderful short (or long) one-shot !
I really love it , it's a bit to sad for my liking and i have this urge to cry right now :$
Your character development is amazing, and you really know how to tell a wonderful short (or long) one-shot !
6/6/2011 c1 Rand.om
I couldn't read the last part well because my heart was beating loud.
I guess that's a good thing...?
I couldn't read the last part well because my heart was beating loud.
I guess that's a good thing...?