for Sleeping Hope5/10/2011 c1 rippling
It was beautiful and not at all cheesy!
Okay maybe a little but I loved it! (:
Keep writing! :D
-RE
It was beautiful and not at all cheesy!
Okay maybe a little but I loved it! (:
Keep writing! :D
-RE
4/14/2011 c1 
8urtenshii
that was just so sad :( but i really like how you gave life to each character of the story ! nice work there :)
8urtenshiithat was just so sad :( but i really like how you gave life to each character of the story ! nice work there :)
11/13/2010 c1 Princess Mariana
It was really good, until the ending, which made me feel horrible and teary eyed...
It was really good, until the ending, which made me feel horrible and teary eyed...
8/19/2009 c1 5kissmesober
God this was adorable.
I love your writing style :D and great character development. You seem to be good at that within one shots! Haha :D
I loved it.
5kissmesoberGod this was adorable.
I love your writing style :D and great character development. You seem to be good at that within one shots! Haha :D
I loved it.
8/17/2009 c1 tkaiya
Holy shit, was that sad or what!
D; Honestly, it wasn't that corny.
But it was really well-written and genius, baby!
Beautiful. :)
Holy shit, was that sad or what!
D; Honestly, it wasn't that corny.
But it was really well-written and genius, baby!
Beautiful. :)
3/15/2009 c1 Kjersti
Very sweet story. The ending made me want to cry.
Very sweet story. The ending made me want to cry.
2/27/2009 c1 13blurrylights
This made me so sad...but it really was beautiful and touching.
"I still Love her."
-That line especially broke my heart...
You did such an amazing job with this one. :)
13blurrylightsThis made me so sad...but it really was beautiful and touching.
"I still Love her."
-That line especially broke my heart...
You did such an amazing job with this one. :)
2/16/2009 c1 6gigi-2000
You suck. I loved it, but you SUCK. It was amazing, but you suck. I cried and you suck.
6gigi-2000You suck. I loved it, but you SUCK. It was amazing, but you suck. I cried and you suck.
12/26/2008 c1 1Qwaudzkhi
awhh. tragic..yes cheesy but lovely...
i don't know what i am feeling right now.
this is how i would really feel when some big character dies.. just like this book i read "A message in a bottle" by nicholas sparks.
tsk.
it feel so terrible..
nice. ^^
1Qwaudzkhiawhh. tragic..yes cheesy but lovely...
i don't know what i am feeling right now.
this is how i would really feel when some big character dies.. just like this book i read "A message in a bottle" by nicholas sparks.
tsk.
it feel so terrible..
nice. ^^
12/8/2008 c1 OoohLookACat
oh
that's so sad
but i liked it
a lot
and i feel like i should cry or something
but i did like it - love it
its a sweet story
i still feel like i should cry
good job!
izzie
oh
that's so sad
but i liked it
a lot
and i feel like i should cry or something
but i did like it - love it
its a sweet story
i still feel like i should cry
good job!
izzie
9/6/2008 c1 1Jeni D
How incredibly sad. Beautiful though...and yes, slightly cheesy. But, still. I adored Jeremiah. He's amusing and annoying and a very fun character.
This story is a definite favorite. I'm so glad that I found it.
CHEERS!
~Jeni
1Jeni DHow incredibly sad. Beautiful though...and yes, slightly cheesy. But, still. I adored Jeremiah. He's amusing and annoying and a very fun character.
This story is a definite favorite. I'm so glad that I found it.
CHEERS!
~Jeni
7/14/2008 c1 Green Eyed Angel
It's a bit cheesy, but it's not bad. I've read worse. no, just kidding. it's nice. Haha. :D no, seriously, it's sweet. But the last part is sad.
It's a bit cheesy, but it's not bad. I've read worse. no, just kidding. it's nice. Haha. :D no, seriously, it's sweet. But the last part is sad.