for Sleeping Hope6/30/2008 c1 
25Kyllex
Oh. My. God. That was so...awesome! Okay, it was a little cheesy, (xD) but hey, It was ADORABLE! And seriously, I started tearing up at the end. Yes, like, CRYING tearing up.
That was so sweet and the end was really sad. Well I mean, it was happy, but it was sad, and...
Ok yeah I have no idea where I'm going with this review. Anyway. It was great! Kudos for that. I loved it! :]
And you know what? I think you've earned a spot on my favorite authors list. WOOHOO! Jump for joy...xD
Blah.
-kyllex
25KyllexOh. My. God. That was so...awesome! Okay, it was a little cheesy, (xD) but hey, It was ADORABLE! And seriously, I started tearing up at the end. Yes, like, CRYING tearing up.
That was so sweet and the end was really sad. Well I mean, it was happy, but it was sad, and...
Ok yeah I have no idea where I'm going with this review. Anyway. It was great! Kudos for that. I loved it! :]
And you know what? I think you've earned a spot on my favorite authors list. WOOHOO! Jump for joy...xD
Blah.
-kyllex
5/12/2008 c1 2CrossMyHeart
so... did she like, Die?
`cause if she did, i might have to cry..
If not, Good Story! (even if she did though)
XxCrossMyHeartxX
2CrossMyHeartso... did she like, Die?
`cause if she did, i might have to cry..
If not, Good Story! (even if she did though)
XxCrossMyHeartxX
4/13/2008 c1 1Arista Ramabra
haha very sweet
I gotta admit, that's my philosophy too. If I can't end a story, I kill the character and make it a tragic, emotional, dramatic ending. But it's weird, I can write tragic stories but I can never read other people's tragedies. It makes me too sad haha.
~Arista
1Arista Ramabrahaha very sweet
I gotta admit, that's my philosophy too. If I can't end a story, I kill the character and make it a tragic, emotional, dramatic ending. But it's weird, I can write tragic stories but I can never read other people's tragedies. It makes me too sad haha.
~Arista
3/13/2008 c1 18found.eventually
i knew it. I KNEW IT.
The moment I started reading the story, the moment I realize what her name would be and related it to the story title, I knew she would die. Okay, not really. But the idea of her dying was there! XP
And it was so heartbreaking! Why! Poor Jeremiah. I love the quotes because it's just so... I don't know, it adds the final touch, you know?
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
18found.eventuallyi knew it. I KNEW IT.
The moment I started reading the story, the moment I realize what her name would be and related it to the story title, I knew she would die. Okay, not really. But the idea of her dying was there! XP
And it was so heartbreaking! Why! Poor Jeremiah. I love the quotes because it's just so... I don't know, it adds the final touch, you know?
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
3/11/2008 c1 blurgh87
that was so sad! it was hard for me to breathe towards the end because i kept thinking, "omg, she's gonna die!", and she did. poor jeremiah!
overall a very lovely, heart wrenching story...
that was so sad! it was hard for me to breathe towards the end because i kept thinking, "omg, she's gonna die!", and she did. poor jeremiah!
overall a very lovely, heart wrenching story...
11/25/2007 c1 3Hearts To Rome
GAH! this is so sad... as soon as i finished reading this, i felt really deflated. good job, though
3Hearts To RomeGAH! this is so sad... as soon as i finished reading this, i felt really deflated. good job, though
11/7/2007 c1 1relapse into change
this is soo beautiful & nicely written
i loved it and the ending was just so
unexpecting and lovely
-fav
1relapse into changethis is soo beautiful & nicely written
i loved it and the ending was just so
unexpecting and lovely
-fav
9/1/2007 c1 3livedhappilyeverafter
Oh, man. This is such a bittersweet story. It was really well-written, and tugged at the heartstrings. I could totally feel Jeremiah's emotions and stuff. What happened in the end? No offence, but I feel really frustrated at this kind of endings- the ones that leave you hanging in mid-air ):
3livedhappilyeverafterOh, man. This is such a bittersweet story. It was really well-written, and tugged at the heartstrings. I could totally feel Jeremiah's emotions and stuff. What happened in the end? No offence, but I feel really frustrated at this kind of endings- the ones that leave you hanging in mid-air ):
8/21/2007 c1 19ihrtbks
*wipes away tears* This was so CUTE! I usually can't handle sad endings but yours was bearable because it was so sweet. Jeremiah's POV was convincing, both as a male and as a unique character. Jeremiah's frivolity reminds me of Ryan from YaE. You could add a little more time references in there though your "somewhere between our hundredth and thousandth encounter" thing was cute. Is this over a four months...a year...what?
*CLAPS*
PS: I LOVE THE QUOTES!
19ihrtbks*wipes away tears* This was so CUTE! I usually can't handle sad endings but yours was bearable because it was so sweet. Jeremiah's POV was convincing, both as a male and as a unique character. Jeremiah's frivolity reminds me of Ryan from YaE. You could add a little more time references in there though your "somewhere between our hundredth and thousandth encounter" thing was cute. Is this over a four months...a year...what?
*CLAPS*
PS: I LOVE THE QUOTES!
8/19/2007 c1 16Cloudsinthesky
Well, this was very cute. I know people say "I can't believe you killed her" but I'm really glad you did. It made a good ending, even if it was a sad one. The style was amazing, 'The first time I saw her she was asleep, the last time I Saw her she was asleep.' How ironic those lines. Nice, cute, short, and a feel good story. Bravo.
16CloudsintheskyWell, this was very cute. I know people say "I can't believe you killed her" but I'm really glad you did. It made a good ending, even if it was a sad one. The style was amazing, 'The first time I saw her she was asleep, the last time I Saw her she was asleep.' How ironic those lines. Nice, cute, short, and a feel good story. Bravo.
7/19/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
Wow. Unexpected and well written. I loved it. So sad but so beautiful. Wonderful, actually. Definitely going on my favorites. Great ending. I wish it hadn't been that way but it was definitely wonderful. Good work. You are a talented writer. Never stop.
332smile for the sunshineWow. Unexpected and well written. I loved it. So sad but so beautiful. Wonderful, actually. Definitely going on my favorites. Great ending. I wish it hadn't been that way but it was definitely wonderful. Good work. You are a talented writer. Never stop.
7/18/2007 c1 2codyismypup
OMG SHE'S DEAD? -and there I go, killing off the dramaticasism of the story-(I forgot the word dramathing I was supposed to use, woops)
What? Yeah, I love this story, because it reminds me of ME and MY FRIEND. Except we're not gay...and not in love,...so we aren't very alike. BUT anyways. The whole whe, barbacue at the beach!
Still very very sweet. Like...that bird's gonna taste if it doesn't stop chirping outside my WINDOW! Moving on, like sugar or something.
Aw! I loved it! And I liked how you wrote I Love you with a capital L.
OMG my name is Becky TOO! Well, I actually hate being called Becky because it reminds me of that summer camp when there were SEVEN (seven! What, did 7 other mom's say, Rebecca, get your butt into the car, you're going to SUMMAH CAMP whether you like it or NOT?) other girls named Rebecca. Which lead to an extremely annoying summer of counselors saying Rebecca and 8 girls turning around. Which lead to -gasp- NICKNAMES! I was called Becky(now,It might fit You, but for me, someone who tells the teacher over and over again, NO I do NOT want a nickname, is that so HARD to remember? It's rather annoying), Becca, BecBec(thankfully, I wasn't called that) Rebecca(which isn't even a nickname!),Reba (that's a whole different name all together!), BB (which sounds like a type of gun), Bella (Rebecca-Bella? They're not connected!), and one of them went by her middle name. which I don't care enough to remember.
Hmm, your name might not even be Rebecca, that would make that whole last paragraph totally...useless. -wince- and it's kind of WEIRD to have someone go on a rant on you about having the same name...which oh em gee, rhymes! hehe, I'm gonna go now and have something for breakfast (It's 8:51 in the morning-I couldn't sleep)
BYE-RAR
2codyismypupOMG SHE'S DEAD? -and there I go, killing off the dramaticasism of the story-(I forgot the word dramathing I was supposed to use, woops)
What? Yeah, I love this story, because it reminds me of ME and MY FRIEND. Except we're not gay...and not in love,...so we aren't very alike. BUT anyways. The whole whe, barbacue at the beach!
Still very very sweet. Like...that bird's gonna taste if it doesn't stop chirping outside my WINDOW! Moving on, like sugar or something.
Aw! I loved it! And I liked how you wrote I Love you with a capital L.
OMG my name is Becky TOO! Well, I actually hate being called Becky because it reminds me of that summer camp when there were SEVEN (seven! What, did 7 other mom's say, Rebecca, get your butt into the car, you're going to SUMMAH CAMP whether you like it or NOT?) other girls named Rebecca. Which lead to an extremely annoying summer of counselors saying Rebecca and 8 girls turning around. Which lead to -gasp- NICKNAMES! I was called Becky(now,It might fit You, but for me, someone who tells the teacher over and over again, NO I do NOT want a nickname, is that so HARD to remember? It's rather annoying), Becca, BecBec(thankfully, I wasn't called that) Rebecca(which isn't even a nickname!),Reba (that's a whole different name all together!), BB (which sounds like a type of gun), Bella (Rebecca-Bella? They're not connected!), and one of them went by her middle name. which I don't care enough to remember.
Hmm, your name might not even be Rebecca, that would make that whole last paragraph totally...useless. -wince- and it's kind of WEIRD to have someone go on a rant on you about having the same name...which oh em gee, rhymes! hehe, I'm gonna go now and have something for breakfast (It's 8:51 in the morning-I couldn't sleep)
BYE-RAR