for Hellish8/20/2007 c1 
15Jecori
agh...i know the slight feeling. hellish. except it really isn't so slight.
hey, i didn't know your name was kate.
when i first reviewed your stuff, i don't know..it just didn't click that you were a girl. i've done that twice now... haha
i love haikus, and this is no exception! its simpleness in words makes it not so simple in meaning, and yadaydaydya whatever, basically i want to say i like this :)
-vesta
[ps. my review is 8 times longer than your poem. and no, i just guessed :| haha]
15Jecoriagh...i know the slight feeling. hellish. except it really isn't so slight.
hey, i didn't know your name was kate.
when i first reviewed your stuff, i don't know..it just didn't click that you were a girl. i've done that twice now... haha
i love haikus, and this is no exception! its simpleness in words makes it not so simple in meaning, and yadaydaydya whatever, basically i want to say i like this :)
-vesta
[ps. my review is 8 times longer than your poem. and no, i just guessed :| haha]
6/4/2007 c1 4Aramis TigerSong
Unfortunately, only too true - the world is being painted red with blood. It's time to end the killing.
4Aramis TigerSongUnfortunately, only too true - the world is being painted red with blood. It's time to end the killing.
5/31/2007 c1 fishslappinghighlandflinger
I really really like this poem. It is short and concise but has so much meaning and power behind it which makes it so great. Wonderful job!
~Stan the Nerd
I really really like this poem. It is short and concise but has so much meaning and power behind it which makes it so great. Wonderful job!
~Stan the Nerd
5/30/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konban wa
Big things come in small packages, and I think this hiaku definitely fits that bill. Again, this will be short because I'm really ready to go to sleep; but I completely agree with this poem at the moment. This past week has been one of my suckiest, so I think I'd like to "unshackle reality" for a little bit. Or at least, since I know I can't do that, I'll just paint the world red ...
Zaijen
-Shan-
konban wa
Big things come in small packages, and I think this hiaku definitely fits that bill. Again, this will be short because I'm really ready to go to sleep; but I completely agree with this poem at the moment. This past week has been one of my suckiest, so I think I'd like to "unshackle reality" for a little bit. Or at least, since I know I can't do that, I'll just paint the world red ...
Zaijen
-Shan-
5/28/2007 c1 8Jess Angel
I second the first reviewers sentiments. Powerful and concise piece. Each word seemed to be chosen carefully. A great read. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
Jess 0:o)
8Jess AngelI second the first reviewers sentiments. Powerful and concise piece. Each word seemed to be chosen carefully. A great read. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
Jess 0:o)