for Music6/11/2008 c1 Leafeus Agamemnon
I love how the thing has a beat to itself. Very well done. One thing though, a minor editorial point:
The rustling
of leaves.
Let's us soar,
with beating hearts.
It should only be "lets us soar."
I love it though. Very well done!
Keep writing!
Fellow of the Pen:
Leafeus Agamemnon
I love how the thing has a beat to itself. Very well done. One thing though, a minor editorial point:
The rustling
of leaves.
Let's us soar,
with beating hearts.
It should only be "lets us soar."
I love it though. Very well done!
Keep writing!
Fellow of the Pen:
Leafeus Agamemnon
4/16/2008 c1 
61Erlkoenigin
gefällt mir. Die Worte fließen dahin wie die Musik. Auch schön die Verknüpfung zwischen der flüchtigen Musik und der Ewigkeit
61Erlkoenigingefällt mir. Die Worte fließen dahin wie die Musik. Auch schön die Verknüpfung zwischen der flüchtigen Musik und der Ewigkeit
7/31/2007 c1 15Bluestreamer
This definitely touched me deep inside because of how true it was. I think you just took simple truth and put it into words. I meant that as a compliment haha. Good work. !)
15BluestreamerThis definitely touched me deep inside because of how true it was. I think you just took simple truth and put it into words. I meant that as a compliment haha. Good work. !)
5/29/2007 c1 Torielle
I really like this; you use simple language and yet the imagery is brilliant.
I don't know if you noticed though, but in the line, "It let’s us soar", the apostrophized "let's". Thought you might want to know.
Again, I like this poem a lot - keep with it!
I really like this; you use simple language and yet the imagery is brilliant.
I don't know if you noticed though, but in the line, "It let’s us soar", the apostrophized "let's". Thought you might want to know.
Again, I like this poem a lot - keep with it!
5/28/2007 c1 8Jess Angel
I love music, so of course reading about it will be a plus for me. I like the emphasis on certain words, using the bolding and italics. The last three seemed connected too. This piece has a good flow to it and a very light-hearted and energetic tone. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
Jess 0:o)
8Jess AngelI love music, so of course reading about it will be a plus for me. I like the emphasis on certain words, using the bolding and italics. The last three seemed connected too. This piece has a good flow to it and a very light-hearted and energetic tone. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
Jess 0:o)