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9/30/2007 c1 4Imalefty
it is quite hazy, and i have no idea what it means. but i can feel the emotion in these words, and i suppose that's what counts. :)

as for concrit... there isn't really any i can give. (well, mostly since it's a poem and poems can be whatever you want them to be. XD) i thought it was quite good - you made it short enough so that it didn't get boring and long enough so that you could describe what was going on. good job!

keep writing!

-Lefty

ps: thanks for reviewing "princess" - i really appreciate it. i'm sorry about the party... =\ anyway, glad you liked it!

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