for A Smack on the Face9/25/2007 c1 
1angel-the-twisted
You have to post more of this story! It's amazing! Not only is it written well but I can't tear my eye's away from it! It's fasnating!
*adds to fav. stories and alerts!*
1angel-the-twistedYou have to post more of this story! It's amazing! Not only is it written well but I can't tear my eye's away from it! It's fasnating!
*adds to fav. stories and alerts!*
9/10/2007 c1 10J.L. Hastings
I'm very interested in seeing where this story goes. I think I'm in love with Marcello. XD
10J.L. HastingsI'm very interested in seeing where this story goes. I think I'm in love with Marcello. XD
6/5/2007 c1 kalyptra
a definite yes!
i like your style..
my reaction is like a moth to a fire, your plot is too scary, too real, and too dark i want to stop reading or else i might get suck in to it but i just can't resist.
i love to read some more...
a definite yes!
i like your style..
my reaction is like a moth to a fire, your plot is too scary, too real, and too dark i want to stop reading or else i might get suck in to it but i just can't resist.
i love to read some more...
5/31/2007 c1 26Melladonna
Well, I'm always one for dark boy-love. It seems to be present in nearly all of my stories ^^; I'm also one for angst, since I'm generally an angst writer (although every now and again I'm known for doing the occasional humorous piece)
As a fellow author, I suggest you expand this piece. You have a great beginning to a story that could sprout potential. Just remember though, it's not truly up to the readers to make the author expand or continue their work. The author has to have the spark and drive to donate to the piece or it falls all to hell.
You have a wonderful thing here, if you truly wish to expand it and it's one of the better written works out here. Whatever your decision, I hope it turns out in the best. Maybe sometime you could stop by and read some of my works. It's always nice to get other's opinions and recognition as a writer.
26MelladonnaWell, I'm always one for dark boy-love. It seems to be present in nearly all of my stories ^^; I'm also one for angst, since I'm generally an angst writer (although every now and again I'm known for doing the occasional humorous piece)
As a fellow author, I suggest you expand this piece. You have a great beginning to a story that could sprout potential. Just remember though, it's not truly up to the readers to make the author expand or continue their work. The author has to have the spark and drive to donate to the piece or it falls all to hell.
You have a wonderful thing here, if you truly wish to expand it and it's one of the better written works out here. Whatever your decision, I hope it turns out in the best. Maybe sometime you could stop by and read some of my works. It's always nice to get other's opinions and recognition as a writer.
5/30/2007 c1 Ze
I want more
it is soo good
please finish !
I wanna know what happens
Z
I want more
it is soo good
please finish !
I wanna know what happens
Z
5/29/2007 c1 2Immoral Haki
I'm interested! The storyline seems kind of dark and attention-grabbing. I'd love it if you would continue with this story. :]
2Immoral HakiI'm interested! The storyline seems kind of dark and attention-grabbing. I'd love it if you would continue with this story. :]
5/29/2007 c1 0.o
uh... I... I... I LO... MARRY ME AND TELL ME STORIES! That was awe inspireing and I hope you expand! You really captured the character and made me lose touch with the present as I witnessed what happened. Been a long time since that happened!anyway keep up writing!
uh... I... I... I LO... MARRY ME AND TELL ME STORIES! That was awe inspireing and I hope you expand! You really captured the character and made me lose touch with the present as I witnessed what happened. Been a long time since that happened!anyway keep up writing!