for Right Path6/1/2007 c1 M. Edmondson
I like the paradox in this poem. It's originial and I'm glad you've chosen this type of moral to right on. I believe your style is growing on me. It was like trying a foriegn soup but not sure if I like it or not. Your style maybe be simple, but it's your own . Three cheers to you for trying something foriegn! I think I spelled that wrong but that's okay.
I like the paradox in this poem. It's originial and I'm glad you've chosen this type of moral to right on. I believe your style is growing on me. It was like trying a foriegn soup but not sure if I like it or not. Your style maybe be simple, but it's your own . Three cheers to you for trying something foriegn! I think I spelled that wrong but that's okay.
5/29/2007 c1 
2InViSiBlE wOmAn
That's a good poem, I think I understand it's message that moving forward is hard to do without looking back. Am I right? Great job!
2InViSiBlE wOmAnThat's a good poem, I think I understand it's message that moving forward is hard to do without looking back. Am I right? Great job!