for How Dost Thou Navigate?6/1/2007 c1 M. Edmondson
I really liked your poem, you have your own style and the slang worked really well with it. You don't seem to follow any of the other poets as I can see with your beats and the structure, along with the rhythm and that my friend is a very good thing! I say keep up with finding even more interesting ways to write poetry. THis poem was awesome though can you take my breath away?
I really liked your poem, you have your own style and the slang worked really well with it. You don't seem to follow any of the other poets as I can see with your beats and the structure, along with the rhythm and that my friend is a very good thing! I say keep up with finding even more interesting ways to write poetry. THis poem was awesome though can you take my breath away?
5/30/2007 c1 
43Dante's Disciple
Charming :D Funny series of rhymes, makes thine head rupture was great :)
43Dante's DiscipleCharming :D Funny series of rhymes, makes thine head rupture was great :)