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5/30/2007 c1 169Creepshow
This poem is perfect.
5/29/2007 c1 8Jess Angel
Haunting. I loved it. The contrast of the two men and where they stand in the narrator's eyes are memorable. I can feel the conflict. Descriptions of both sides are cleverly put together. Terrific piece. All of the stanzas are well done, but the last is absolutely The Stanza.

I'm curious about the title as well; Visine, the eye drops. If you care to, I'd love to hear more about your particular reason(s) for selecting it. :D Of course, leaving it a mystery or for my own interpretations is fine too. I thought it was a great choice. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
5/29/2007 c1 29ShadowedTears
I really like this. Its so sad but true. Good work.

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