for My Two Daddies6/2/2007 c3 KrazyFrog100
OK. The chapters are too short. These past three chapters could have been compacted into one. The story is quite confusing as well. Might want to clear that up. And fix up your tenses.
OK. The chapters are too short. These past three chapters could have been compacted into one. The story is quite confusing as well. Might want to clear that up. And fix up your tenses.