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6/5/2007 c1 173sunshineofyourlife
You have an amazing way of capturing every moment into just the perfect amount of words. My friend once told me that I could turn an ordinary day into a romantic novel or anything I wanted to...you have that talent. I will continue looking for your work. I love it.


P.S. just one thing there is a difference between 'than' and 'then.' I understand the difficulties with typing something and putting on fictionpress...but if you could change one thing for the better, it would be to get those two right. (it's a pet peeve.)
5/31/2007 c1 70EyesEmphatic
Yay! First dates are the best!

Just a couple of little spelling errors, but otherwise this is great.

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