for Her Mask5/25/2008 c1 I'm the Evil Twin
Amazing! The words we all want to say but never are spoken... Congratulations on capturing it so well. I agree completely with the message behind it! Keep writing. Never Stop.
A Fellow Poet
Amazing! The words we all want to say but never are spoken... Congratulations on capturing it so well. I agree completely with the message behind it! Keep writing. Never Stop.
A Fellow Poet
6/21/2007 c1 
72angel953
hm great job! is this suppossed to be about you? i really like it! ah great great great (hyper right now)
72angel953hm great job! is this suppossed to be about you? i really like it! ah great great great (hyper right now)
6/1/2007 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
One of many vividly described poems about masks and how tortured people really are behind them. Your descriptions are just as used, but they're still the pretty images. You have a talent for describing things, and while this poem has emotion, there's little originality here. A good, used idea can result in some nice poetry every once in a while, but if you're capable of such pretty writing, I'd suggest trying to write something that's a bit more personal and original to you. Plus, it may be more interesting to the reader.
37TaltushMeiMeiOne of many vividly described poems about masks and how tortured people really are behind them. Your descriptions are just as used, but they're still the pretty images. You have a talent for describing things, and while this poem has emotion, there's little originality here. A good, used idea can result in some nice poetry every once in a while, but if you're capable of such pretty writing, I'd suggest trying to write something that's a bit more personal and original to you. Plus, it may be more interesting to the reader.