for Worry Stone6/1/2007 c1 M. Edmondson
I just want to start off by saying, I'm very honest with my critisizm and I wouldn't even say anything if I didn't like it.
The way you wrote your poem is growing on me, I'm not sure I like the style or the beat but then again you can't nessacarily define poetry. Still I felt like I've heard this sort of style before. The simple wording the humble phrase. Not to be mean or anything but nothing really sparks in your poem for me. I don't feel really moved by it. THough I believe you have the potential to make this poem magical.
I want to thank you for writing a review and I espiecally appreciate the critisizm. I can't describe how much I really am grateful for your honest opinion. I just got a hate mail this morning for being too cruel though I refuse to watch my words. I'm not sorry if I came out too harsh, because I don't think I did. I say it to help you, because I care.
I just want to start off by saying, I'm very honest with my critisizm and I wouldn't even say anything if I didn't like it.
The way you wrote your poem is growing on me, I'm not sure I like the style or the beat but then again you can't nessacarily define poetry. Still I felt like I've heard this sort of style before. The simple wording the humble phrase. Not to be mean or anything but nothing really sparks in your poem for me. I don't feel really moved by it. THough I believe you have the potential to make this poem magical.
I want to thank you for writing a review and I espiecally appreciate the critisizm. I can't describe how much I really am grateful for your honest opinion. I just got a hate mail this morning for being too cruel though I refuse to watch my words. I'm not sorry if I came out too harsh, because I don't think I did. I say it to help you, because I care.
6/1/2007 c1 Imperia
very emotional, good flow. i like this poem a lot. i can relate to it in many ways. all i can say is that it does get easier with time.
very emotional, good flow. i like this poem a lot. i can relate to it in many ways. all i can say is that it does get easier with time.