for Sealed with a Bite6/22/2007 c4 
6Carmel March
I loved those descriptions :) And that line: {You have a nice looking abdomen}. I loved it! All in all, fantastic chapter, and I'm looking forward to more!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchI loved those descriptions :) And that line: {You have a nice looking abdomen}. I loved it! All in all, fantastic chapter, and I'm looking forward to more!
~carm~
6/5/2007 c3 Carmel March
Hey! Fantastic chapter. It cleared up a few things that you had left hanging, like the main character's name, Courtney, and the ages of both her and Night. Though I do wonder why a 25 year old-looking male vampire would be interested in a 15 year old human. Perhaps it's the whole innocence factor, or maybe just circumstances. I can't wait to see where this goes!
~carm~
Hey! Fantastic chapter. It cleared up a few things that you had left hanging, like the main character's name, Courtney, and the ages of both her and Night. Though I do wonder why a 25 year old-looking male vampire would be interested in a 15 year old human. Perhaps it's the whole innocence factor, or maybe just circumstances. I can't wait to see where this goes!
~carm~
6/5/2007 c3 smrae
Gee! I wonder what happens next? lol Great update can't wait to see what...happens...lol
Gee! I wonder what happens next? lol Great update can't wait to see what...happens...lol
6/4/2007 c2 Carmel March
Nice chapter! Now we're getting a feel for Night, his son, and the main character. Great job on this, and I hope to read more soon!
~carm~
Nice chapter! Now we're getting a feel for Night, his son, and the main character. Great job on this, and I hope to read more soon!
~carm~
6/2/2007 c1 smrae
Oh NO! She's a vampire! lol Love the begining! Who would of thought you'd be turned into a vampire in the bathroom? lol PLease update soon!
Oh NO! She's a vampire! lol Love the begining! Who would of thought you'd be turned into a vampire in the bathroom? lol PLease update soon!
6/2/2007 c1 6Carmel March
What an intriguing beginning! I like your descriptions of the main character and the 'vampire hottie' :) Good job on this, and I can't wait to read more!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchWhat an intriguing beginning! I like your descriptions of the main character and the 'vampire hottie' :) Good job on this, and I can't wait to read more!
~carm~