for Choices6/27/2008 c1 
1RosaLeeM
woah, this is literally something i relate to exactly. it's sort of scary, it's dead-on there. good job with it! even if people don't tell you it's well written, know that it is!
1RosaLeeMwoah, this is literally something i relate to exactly. it's sort of scary, it's dead-on there. good job with it! even if people don't tell you it's well written, know that it is!
6/28/2007 c1 12AuthorLittle
Well, I guess this isn't an autobiographical poem, seeing as you were alive enough to upload it onto this site. Anyway, I definitely agree w/what's-his-or-her-face, 'sis' was used maybe a lil too much.
12AuthorLittleWell, I guess this isn't an autobiographical poem, seeing as you were alive enough to upload it onto this site. Anyway, I definitely agree w/what's-his-or-her-face, 'sis' was used maybe a lil too much.
6/22/2007 c1 9flashlitdarknessxx
Thanks for the review on my poem 'lets keep in touch'. I really like this, its deep. Maybe you could have not said 'sis' as much. =)
9flashlitdarknessxxThanks for the review on my poem 'lets keep in touch'. I really like this, its deep. Maybe you could have not said 'sis' as much. =)
6/21/2007 c1 173Exodus.Escence Of Sin
i liked this one, lots of emotion in it which makes it amazingly...awesome ^.^
thnxs for the review on mine by the way, i really did appreciate it .
~*evanescence123*~
173Exodus.Escence Of Sini liked this one, lots of emotion in it which makes it amazingly...awesome ^.^
thnxs for the review on mine by the way, i really did appreciate it .
~*evanescence123*~
6/5/2007 c1 87Kissing Concrete
pretty- really good lesson and really showed how much she wanted her sister to succeed... nice job.
87Kissing Concretepretty- really good lesson and really showed how much she wanted her sister to succeed... nice job.
6/1/2007 c1 1Cella Dura
That was awsome! Really powerful. It almost made me cry. Almost. Hey read and review some of mine sometimes please.
1Cella DuraThat was awsome! Really powerful. It almost made me cry. Almost. Hey read and review some of mine sometimes please.