for Death in The Most Dashing of Forms6/3/2007 c1 
46antigonelives
This is a good idea, but you really need to punctuate in a poem like this. You're missing commas, semicolons and the like, and that makes this harder to read than it should be.
It is, however, a good idea.
~Kira's Song
46antigonelivesThis is a good idea, but you really need to punctuate in a poem like this. You're missing commas, semicolons and the like, and that makes this harder to read than it should be.
It is, however, a good idea.
~Kira's Song