for Beat of Retreat6/8/2007 c1 
5revelinginyou
wow...it's so weird how these things happen. "I hate myself for wanting you, but I hate you more for knowing I do" That line just speaks to me. I keep reading it over and over. You are a very good writer.
5revelinginyouwow...it's so weird how these things happen. "I hate myself for wanting you, but I hate you more for knowing I do" That line just speaks to me. I keep reading it over and over. You are a very good writer.
6/7/2007 c1 140Pesadilla Mortal
Wow. This was stunning, and spoke to my mood. I was in this situation...[though I hate to admit it] and so these words really struck a soft spot in my heart. And these two lines struck the hardest:
"I hate myself for wanting you
but I hate you more for knowing I do"
I love the way you put this together; it flows beautifully. Keep up the good work :]
140Pesadilla MortalWow. This was stunning, and spoke to my mood. I was in this situation...[though I hate to admit it] and so these words really struck a soft spot in my heart. And these two lines struck the hardest:
"I hate myself for wanting you
but I hate you more for knowing I do"
I love the way you put this together; it flows beautifully. Keep up the good work :]
6/5/2007 c1 51instant bliss
"I don't like the harmony of your scapegrace". Great line. Good poem, too. =P
51instant bliss"I don't like the harmony of your scapegrace". Great line. Good poem, too. =P