
6/5/2007 c1
53The Angel in Black
I kind of liked this a lot. But the line "Fire breathing monsters will ice cold hearts" confused me a bit. Is it a typo, or is it supposed to be like that? This is really good, though! That line just kind of turned me off of it a bit.

I kind of liked this a lot. But the line "Fire breathing monsters will ice cold hearts" confused me a bit. Is it a typo, or is it supposed to be like that? This is really good, though! That line just kind of turned me off of it a bit.