
10/9/2009 c2 ger
"He soon then making fun of me"
maybe you meant, "He WAS soon then making making fun of me" ? :D
i'm kinda interested with how you'll make this less cliche in the next chapters to come.. :D
btw, sorry i just noticed your story now.. :D
"He soon then making fun of me"
maybe you meant, "He WAS soon then making making fun of me" ? :D
i'm kinda interested with how you'll make this less cliche in the next chapters to come.. :D
btw, sorry i just noticed your story now.. :D
8/27/2008 c10 sexposed
kya~ i shall review for the heck of it even tho im not sure if your still writing this story because i havent gotten that far yeh~
kya~ i shall review for the heck of it even tho im not sure if your still writing this story because i havent gotten that far yeh~
8/27/2008 c5 sexposed
hoyeh...im such a sucker for teenage romance stories..damn my sick obsession. ah but its fun lol
hoyeh...im such a sucker for teenage romance stories..damn my sick obsession. ah but its fun lol
10/23/2007 c2 a.mooch
OKay, i like how you don't make it her fault that jason and her are on bad terms, that's always good.
OKay, i like how you don't make it her fault that jason and her are on bad terms, that's always good.
8/30/2007 c10 PurplePrincess
I really like it, sorry it took so long to review. Keep writing, even though school is sucking for you! I'm personally at home sick right now :) But yay I love this chapter!
I really like it, sorry it took so long to review. Keep writing, even though school is sucking for you! I'm personally at home sick right now :) But yay I love this chapter!
8/24/2007 c10
2MyAngelSassy
O an update! I like your chapters but there a bit too short for my liking, but i'm still going to read don't worry! And i would like to see the scene's more descriptive like the kissing scenes =P lol but keep up the good work! And update soon!

O an update! I like your chapters but there a bit too short for my liking, but i'm still going to read don't worry! And i would like to see the scene's more descriptive like the kissing scenes =P lol but keep up the good work! And update soon!
8/13/2007 c9 PurplePrincess
This is so good! And Ch. 8 too, bc I never reviewed that one. Have fun in Colo. and keep on writing! :)
This is so good! And Ch. 8 too, bc I never reviewed that one. Have fun in Colo. and keep on writing! :)