
6/6/2007 c1
34Le-Fey
I love the emotion and the suspence that are intertwined in your work. Very beautifuly written, however, the begining and the ending are still slightly confusing.

I love the emotion and the suspence that are intertwined in your work. Very beautifuly written, however, the begining and the ending are still slightly confusing.
6/6/2007 c1
86Philip Ellis
I like the style of this poem; seeing darkness from the eyes of an innocent bystander. The 'sleeping beauty' parallel helps with the youthful, naive tone.

I like the style of this poem; seeing darkness from the eyes of an innocent bystander. The 'sleeping beauty' parallel helps with the youthful, naive tone.