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for breakfast with sleeping beauty

6/6/2007 c1 34Le-Fey
I love the emotion and the suspence that are intertwined in your work. Very beautifuly written, however, the begining and the ending are still slightly confusing.
6/6/2007 c1 86Philip Ellis
I like the style of this poem; seeing darkness from the eyes of an innocent bystander. The 'sleeping beauty' parallel helps with the youthful, naive tone.

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